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« on: November 02, 2008, 06:07:14 PM »
Getting rid of this, sorry.
« Last Edit: February 26, 2012, 08:37:13 PM by Devault »
Comments are like chocolate donuts to writers :3

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2008, 06:08:45 PM »
Nice. Keep it going.
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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2008, 06:34:07 PM »
Now you dont have to worry about that. But keep the rules in mind if you plan it to get raunchy.

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2008, 06:35:14 PM »
If you posted today, yes. You can either wait until someone else comments or post the next day. Depending.
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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2008, 07:20:15 PM »
Nice, its a pretty good story thus far. its nice to have another who likes to do literature we certainly need more of it

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2008, 08:59:07 PM »
Yeah well other then a few of us on this board I wouldnt exactly expect a Steven King response here either, but you write a good story. Though I'd be weary about refering to any of your characters "Crazyily screwing another" It may sound stupid but it borders the line.

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #6 on: November 02, 2008, 09:24:13 PM »
Nice, a little foreboding piece to keep people comming back for more. I find it fascinating really, what could possibly be in store for them. One of the better things about independant writers are they tend to be a lot less predictable because they aren't contrained by the needs of marketing and sales or a companies rules for a book.

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #7 on: November 04, 2008, 05:37:19 AM »
Nice, I look forward to reading more of it. it really is one of the better reads in this section for a while

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #8 on: November 04, 2008, 02:40:58 PM »
yo this is, great man, i'm hooked, wow u guys really know how to write a good story

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #9 on: November 04, 2008, 05:30:51 PM »
yo this is really cool, i'm so hooked right now, i rally like it man keep it up

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #10 on: November 04, 2008, 05:55:53 PM »
Yeah definately keep it up, its like reading a professional story, a good one at that

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #11 on: November 05, 2008, 02:50:22 AM »
dud this is nothing short of pure internet crack, this is worse than WOW great job man, scary and interesting, can't wait for more

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #12 on: November 05, 2008, 03:23:31 PM »
Awesome two chapters, things are definately heating up I cant wait to read more.

And a dragon. Nice

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #13 on: November 05, 2008, 03:48:17 PM »
Simply awesome. I find myself subconsciously rooting them on, particularly the snake Rellian (its that reptile affinity)

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Re: Raven's Hollow Series
« Reply #14 on: November 05, 2008, 10:39:21 PM »
Another masterful piece of story.

So is rellian really half dragon?

 

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