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English project DX
« on: March 22, 2010, 02:36:32 AM »
OK so i doubt any one wants to read all of this but by some chance you do please tell me what you think

The effect of green house gases can seem very vague and insignificant to the unaware mass population. The absent minded mass majority that controls the government officials lack any real intelligence on any issues with out having some mnemonic to remember something that may actually pertain to something of a greater importance then some fast food slogan. The effects of humans extra emission of green house gases are very real and have a deleterious effect on the environment. The extra green house gases is nothing short of a blight on the world. The extra green houses gases that have been emitted into the air have had irrefutable consequences from the lack of controlling and subsidizing any program for reducing it. The ozone has been destroyed in cretin parts of the world. The danger of leaving these emissions unchecked is that these dangerous ozone destroying chemicals take a long time to reach the stratosphere. In just a two years the destruction of the ozone layer went from some one million square kilometers too twenty eight point three million square kilometers. The destruction of the ozone layer leaves the all living organisms susceptible to the harmful ultra violet rays-B radiation (aka UVB). This could cause life threatening skin cancer that would rapidly increase in the number of people effected by it as the destruction of the ozone layer continues to grow. Now I'm sure some of the more sophisticated of the group think that some sun screen will protect them from the UVB and sadly they are right, god job humanity you found yet another way how to protect your sorry self from any harm you have caused.  What the group didn't count on  is wile they are protecting themselves form the UVB they are blocking essential vitamins that the sun gives us when we stand in it. Yet again our greater minds have figured out how to give you the vitamins with out you doing a darn thing so yet again humans fail to see there horrible ways for what they are and just find another rabbit hole. Well what will the greater minds come up with next to save our sorry hides. Increasing global temperature, what you think hay ill just crank my A.C. up. Well Mr. mass majority with the increase of you're A.C. usage you will increase your electricity use which will then cause the increase of green house gases emission to -gasp- increase. Mr. mass majority what will you do when the polar ice caps melt raising the sea level. Well maybe you'll just mover further inland id that it, but what will you do with the increase of moisture in the air which will cause over flooding. Habitats that are not use to such weather will be demolished and all the crops will die. Soil erosion will speed up if not at least start accruing which will stop all plant life from growing which will kill all of our herbivores. That will in return kill all of our carnivores and then us. How will our great minds come up with a way for any of us to survive with no food. How will any of us do anything when our parasitic little race eats up of its last resource on our host planet. What will we do; I'll tell you what will do will die of just like every other parasite dose after its host can no longer sustain it. Unlike other host though when we die our host wont, we can not stop nature we may be able to slow it down but we will never be able to stop it the earth was here before we here and it will be here long after we are gone. What will we do evacuate our planet and look for another planet that may be able to sustain our little excuse for a society. Will the process continue until we have been gone long enough for our planet to fix its self, or will we just die like a good little insect. What is the point of all of this? Why do we need to make all of these dramatic space trips just to survive? Maybe you could explain to your grandchildren what it felt like to have the wind on your face an not an artificial air. Explain to them why if they where to step out of the dome there bodies would incinerate under the extreme heat. Tell them why instead of just doing something as simple as changing a light bob you deiced to watch TV and put on about twenty pounds every other week. The choice is yours wither you help or not but your choice will effect every one you ever loved, will love, or will come in contact with you and generations over.

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Re: English project DX
« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2010, 07:05:01 PM »
I'm too tired to wade through such a massive block of text. Seriously, paragraphs are good for you, use them. Break the huge block of white writing into manageable chunks.
"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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Re: English project DX
« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2010, 07:09:23 PM »
Darn, beaten to it by Asia  ;)

Yeah, breaking it up will make it much easier for the reader, by also varying your sentence and paragraph length you will find you can build up tension, excitement and action ... or instigate a moment of calm in an otherwise action packed section.

Just read through, and hit enter between sentences whenever you feel it would make sense to, for instance at a change of setting or action...
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