can you guys please constructively criticize the novel i am writing?
premise of my novel:
this is the story of an anthropomorphic wolf who loses his mother shortly after birth (long enough for him to become emotionally attached to her). using elements of the supernatural, science fiction, and fantasy, Dynavwryn goes through life his watching anyone he comes into contact with become decayed and decadent. while trying to find a reason for life to be worthwhile he is betrayed and deceived, eventually becoming further corrupted as he sees his childhood tragedy replay in another person.
through a first person point of view, Dynavwryn explains some scenes that have been taken from the authors experience. these elements of truth prove that some good come out of depression, whether self realization or the need to depend on ones self.
haunted by the memories of something he'll never see, he journeys through his existence as an isolationist, creating internal dialogues and achieving answers with his thoughts. any relationship seeming meaningless, until one...
here is the link to
Chapter 1:
The passingChapter 2:
ObfuscationChapter 3:
Blind the caringChapter 4InterchapterChapter 5:
Medicate meChapter 6Chapter 7:
Ghost of AislinnaChapter 8:
sinners and saintsChapter 9:
Step to the sideAny help is appreciated
