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Little Taco's Poetry :p
« on: April 07, 2011, 06:12:35 PM »
Let me know wat yew think.....

             To be in a world
             But not in a life
             Forgetting one's sorrow
             And giving one strife
             With pain and anguish
             A voice stays unheard
             The people walk around
             Not saying a word
             The burns, cuts, and bruises disregarded
              Supposed loved ones burn you to the ground
             Are you supposed to build yourself back up?
             Or wait to be found
             As I lay here on this tear-covered ground
             I wonder if this life will ever be found.
« Last Edit: April 08, 2011, 05:47:38 PM by Little Taco :) »
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2011, 06:21:53 PM »
*snaps fingers* Kinda describes my life right now. :(
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2011, 07:00:05 PM »
rawr...i kinda wrote that off the top of mii head...
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2011, 09:47:03 PM »
nice. a little spelling mistake but really good otherwise. do you have more your willing to share?
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2011, 10:32:38 PM »
This Life
I dont know why I laugh
I dont know why I cry
All I know is I cant tell whats inside
I think I know whats going on
But I guess life proved me wrong
I want to know so I can be with my King
My life my love my everything
I know the way its long and hard
But I can make it through this life
With my Father by my side.

Post Merge: April 07, 2011, 10:37:51 PM
Realization
There are things going on around us
That alot don't know

Some of us may hate this life
Others may love it
But what they don't realize is there are...

People dying
Lots of crying
Race against race
Abuse to living things
Love is breaking Earth is shaking coming to an end
But love can save the day
Not of spouses but of the heart
You must trust yourself before you can live
To live is to understand your boundaries.
« Last Edit: April 07, 2011, 10:37:51 PM by Little Taco :), Reason: Merged DoublePost »
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #5 on: April 08, 2011, 03:51:39 AM »
I like how you control the pace of the poems (especially the third one you posted) by breaking up the stanzas. Have you ever thought about utilizing punctiation to achieve this effect as well?
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #6 on: April 08, 2011, 01:30:53 PM »
i just dont put puncuation all the time
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2011, 10:06:04 PM »
I definitely like! Im glad you decided to put this up here
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #8 on: April 13, 2011, 10:18:25 PM »
rawr....i wrote a song...but i dont think yewd like it
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #9 on: April 13, 2011, 10:33:58 PM »
I think that you dont know that until I see it ^^
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #10 on: April 14, 2011, 10:19:47 PM »
Yeah little taco, just post it! I'm sure everyone will love it.
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #11 on: May 10, 2011, 03:00:27 PM »
I'm in a world of lust and desire, love and obsession, ice and fire,
Giving your heart is as easy as breathing,
No matter how hard it brings you down in the end,
You trust my heart more than I trust my own life,
I love with my entire heart, not just parts,
But in any words to describe my painI will live for you, die for you,
I will leave everything I know just to be with you.
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« Reply #12 on: May 25, 2011, 05:55:49 PM »
If I hold up this drink, will I say it's my last
If I go with you, will you forgive my past
I can't believe you would live to love me
But, please don't assume you can fix me

I'm not just some car you can fix up... ~Bella Swan
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #13 on: May 29, 2011, 04:32:13 AM »
Taco... Im in shock, your really good!
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Re: Little Taco's Poetry :p
« Reply #14 on: May 30, 2011, 01:43:04 AM »
thanks.......i don't really try but thanks anyways.......i may put some more up later
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