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Offline Wobbyx

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Short story
« on: March 22, 2012, 10:00:17 AM »
THis is my first post in the writing section so i thought i would lead with a piece of writting I did a little while ago, (but there aren't any furries involved because i wrote it before i found the forum, but there will be more to come  :D )

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Re: Short story
« Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 11:55:01 PM »
dude, congrats.
a bit of a S.T.A.L.K.E.R. influence? :P


even so well done. my only criticism being it could have a more interesting twist at the end of the story, but then that's just my over exposure to video game violence
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Re: Short story
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2012, 02:53:08 AM »
haha thanks man, it was a bit STALKER inspired
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