Should I Continue This Story?

[Spotted_Serval]

This is something I started writing a few years back, but I didn't like where I was taking it, and scrapped it for a while. I have debated whether it is worth going back and re-writing it to try and take it in a different direction. Thoughts?


http://hamant.deviantart.com/art/Eloca-Prologue-and-Chapter-1-332560807?ga_submit_new=10%253A1362345643&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1

[Ventus Fall]

Oh, you're the one who watched me on dA!
Thanks btw for that ^^

As for your story:
To me, it's very well written. In the way it's easy to read (which is a good thing). It reads fluently, I should say. And the story seems interesting. If you want to -and have the time- I think you should definitley re-write it, or at least continue it

[Spotted_Serval]

Oh, you're the one who watched me on dA!
Thanks btw for that ^^

As for your story:
To me, it's very well written. In the way it's easy to read (which is a good thing). It reads fluently, I should say. And the story seems interesting. If you want to -and have the time- I think you should definitley re-write it, or at least continue it

Haha yeah, that was me. You're welcome.

Alright, perhaps I will keep working on it then. Thanks!

[Ventus Fall]

They def. have a lot of potential ^^

[Spotted_Serval]

They def. have a lot of potential ^^

Thanks! It was really just an attempt at keeping an ongoing storyline. I usually just write poems. Haha