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Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« on: January 15, 2014, 02:56:24 AM »
Well, I guess that the title says it all. I hope you guys like it! Be sure to leave input!!! :3
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2014, 03:00:13 AM »
Uniformation By: Me

Shave me,
bathe me.
Take my,
hair off.
Take my metallica tee.
Make me wear a polo and some dress pants,
then promise me I'm free.

My identity is so lost to me,
as it already stands.
Now they say lose the cargo pants,
shave the beard and put on a hair net.

Uniformation,keeps this nation clean.
of people like me who wanna be unique.
True rebels of the day.
So take me and change me until I'm ready.
For the real world,
so they say.
I thought I lived in the real world today.
I guess I was wrong,
and I guess I have no clue.
Cuz they keep tellin me if I try to be a hero,
I'll be,
wearin county blues.

Now the appearance is just one of many,
aspects they needed to change.
I still havent learned to speak in spanish or
How I should behave.
When people aren't happy that their waiter is a freak.
And customers call me a fag.

My identity already eludes me,
and now they try to make me feel.
Insecure, and not sure.
About a single **censor** thing.


Uniformation, keeps this nation clean.
of people like me who wanna be unique.
True rebels of the day.
So take me and change me until I'm ready.
For the real world,
so they say.
I thought I lived in the real world today.
I guess I was wrong,
and I guess I have no clue.
Cuz they keep tellin me if I try to be a hero,
I'll be,
wearin county blues.

(Guitar solos and shit)

No more,
tattoos.
No more,
peircings.
No more,
make up.
No more,
dress up.
No more,
hair dye.
No more,
People like I.
No more,
wolf tail.
They want no more,
but they'll fail...
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2014, 03:34:07 AM »
Lost In Reality, By: Me

My brain hurts,
visions blurred.
Everything,
seems absurd.
Keep in mind, nothings what it seems.
Let me,
tear reality.
Apart at,
the seams.
And construct a world based on my dreams.

What a mindfuck this seems to be,
people just wont stop questioning.
Let me live out my fantasies,
Cuz this world aint meant for me.
I promise you that if you live in dreams,
you'll find yourself lost in reality.

The present,
escapes my view.
What time is it?
I don't have a clue.
I need someone to snap me out of this.
I cant,
remember.
Anything,
since last December.
When I watched her walk away with a lie.

What a mindfuck this seems to me,
(In my head, in my head)
people just wont stop questioning.
(Makes me dread, what I said)
Let me live out my fantasies,
(Away from, your horseshit.)
Cuz this world aint meant for me.
(I think that they want me dead)
I promise you that if you live in dreams,
you'll find yourself lost in reality.

(Guitar Solos)

Blind eyes,
crooked spine.
Bleeding heart,
all the time.
Body and mind falling apart.
They laugh,
I run away.
Somewhere,
Im safe.
And I pray that they won't find me.


What a mindfuck this seems to me,
(In my head, in my head)
people just wont stop questioning.
(Makes me dread, what I said)
Let me live out my fantasies,
(Away from, your horseshit.)
Cuz this world aint meant for me.
(I think that they want me dead)
I promise you that if you live in dreams,
you'll find yourself lost in reality.
What the hell is this supposed to be,
(Am I dead, am I dead)
Was it all just a dream?
(In my head, brain melted.)
Still I try to run away,
(From regret, from the past.)
And I run into her again...
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2014, 12:19:12 PM »
These are good keep them up :D
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2014, 12:00:22 AM »
I listen to instrumentals and pretend the lyrics are the ones you wrote.
And they always work out great!
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2014, 02:19:04 AM »
Oxenfree, By: Me

They encourage you to be afraid.
Of all the people, people like me.
When we try to teach you our philosiphy.
We're branded as psychopaths and cast aside.

Do you really believe that I
have gone to the dark side
The son you wanted is dead
and I don't care.

Ollie ollie oxenfree
All I want is to be free.
For you to stop instigating.
Ollie ollie oxenfree
Could you shut the **censor** up for me
and leave me alone.
**censor** off!

People like you are so brainwashed it's funny
Every word you say
Comes off as stupid and you never even knew it.
Your blind to your own pysche

And my daddy, hes ashamed
that I'm in love with a freak.
Just cuz she wears makeup and lots of dark colour.
She must commit satinist worship.

If only I knew!

Ollie ollie oxenfree
All I want is to be free.
For you to stop instigating.
Ollie ollie oxenfree
Could you shut the **censor** up for me
and leave me alone.
**censor** off!

All my friends are lying,
they won't tell me the truth.
They know something about you baby.
But where is the proof?
Until I see something that proves
their, accusations.
That you're just a slut,
and a dirty harlot.
Then I'll tell them to **censor** off.

Ollie ollie oxenfree
All I want is to be free.
For you to stop instigating.
Ollie ollie oxenfree
Could you shut the **censor** up for me
and leave me alone.
**censor** off!
Ollie ollie oxenfree
All I want is to be free.
For you to shut the **censor** up
Ollie ollie oxenfree
Could you drink bleach and die for me
and if not just not just go the **censor** home.
**censor** off!
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2014, 02:24:11 AM »
Really Good!
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #7 on: January 16, 2014, 02:29:52 AM »
What do you think the good things In my writing?
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #8 on: January 16, 2014, 02:31:42 AM »
the Fluency, the right timing.. etc!
Many things!
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« Reply #9 on: January 16, 2014, 02:32:11 AM »
Thank you!  ^_^
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« Reply #10 on: January 16, 2014, 02:32:41 AM »
Off! Do your thing!

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« Reply #11 on: January 16, 2014, 02:35:41 AM »
Young Mind, By: Me

The smiles are invinting,
the laughter so exiting.
The proposition of education.
Is exhilarating.
But deep underneath these thin walls.
Lies a darker purpose to,
these darkened halls.
You've come accustomed to.

It all starts off with a, young mind.
It all starts off with a, young mind.
It all starts off with a, young mind.
And this is how it goes.

At the somber age of seven,
the children go to school.
To learn obedience.
As the years progress and the meds take effect.
We can begin teaching basic skills.
Like obeying people that haven't earned your respect.
Or working with people you have a **censor** problem with.

It all starts off with a, young mind.
It all starts off with a, young mind.
It all starts off with a, young mind.
And this is how it goes.

When the children hit adolescence,
we get a little **censor** scared.
Some snap out of it and rebel.
So we throw the in a room.
And for all the rest,
just for the love of God keep them from,
loving, fighting, thinking or running.
All of the above, punishable by death.
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #12 on: January 18, 2014, 06:06:20 AM »
- Icarus, By- Me

A lone wolf,

fighting for his life.

no idea ,

how to survive.

He howls to the sky,

searching for a reason why.

But all he hears are echoes and

empty winds upon the sand.

As he looks up and cries,

will anyone care, when he dies.


He cries for you, he would’ve died for you.

But you don’t seem to care,

now that he’s dying he’s losing faith that

you were ever there.

He wishes that you would have stayed ,

he wishes that you loved him back.

But now that he’s alone again there’s just no turning back.


x2) Ohhh~


He can’t help but picture the times that

you lied in his arms,

or all the things you said to him

even after you broke his heart.

Tears stream down his face as he remembers talking about

names for your pups and where to live,

the depression burns him out.


x2) Ohhh~


Do you know that he loves you?

Do you just not care?

Why the would you lead him on,

pretending you were there?

Are you playing a game,

that he just don’t understand?

Or just faking it,

as you held his hand.


Ahhhh!



(Solos)







As the wolf lies in the snow,

he tries so hard not to show.

The pain he feels deep within,

the empty space where love has been.

He cannot let go of his love,

even though it was so rough.

It’s still all that he knows,
and he carries it wherever he goes.
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« Reply #13 on: January 18, 2014, 06:10:34 AM »
Great!
Keep doing great!
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Re: Dogma's Songwriting! x3
« Reply #14 on: January 18, 2014, 08:36:30 AM »
Beyond Damnation, By- Me


The sun rises, morning’s started.

Brought darkness to light.

As the glimmering radiation beckons me to stand.

Leads me up to my feet in an aggressive stance.

It pulses in me drives me harder to understand…

Why was I born human?

Why does life seem so dead?

Why in the world do I feel,

like i’ve gone beyond…

Damnation!


Past the point of no return and only staring back.

Beyond comprehension!

No hope for the wicked, no lies for the stricken.

In pain…


This endless road of asphalt and denial,

brings me back to a time when.

I stood on the side and prayed for.

A reckless driver to take my life.

But the gods spared me for something more than,

petty human affairs,

Why did I survive?...

Why am I still alive?...

Why in the world do I feel,

like i’ve gone beyond…


Damnation!

Past the point of no return and only staring back.

Beyond comprehension!

No hope for the wicked, no lies for the stricken.

In pain…


What is life,

Nothing more than strife

This is life,

Denial frustration,

take your life.

Said I at one point.

Live your life.

I realized.



Beyond Damnation!

Past the point of no return and only staring back.

Beyond comprehension!

No hope for the wicked, no lies for the stricken.
In pain…
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