Sapiras fight

[saph the sergal]

here is just some of a book i am writing


Saphira heard a noise outside the the warehouse he had to go to it was the third time in the last 3 months since he had turned into a dragon 3 months since he had become a thing in the media 3 months since the police and scientists had tried to capture and study him 3 months since he had lost his whole world. Saphira looked outside darn the media was here how did they know where he was he though to himself might it be that tag they had shot at him?.


i am not going to reveal more at this time because i want to go over a few more things with some people


i just noticed the title as well its meant to be saphiras fight

[Magical Machine]

I like a book that involves a misunderstood being. Makes way for drama, action, possibly a little bit of romance and maybe some humor. In other words, this book of yours sounds like it would be interesting to read. In my opinion.

[saph the sergal]

why thanks

[Magical Machine]

You're welcome.


Also, what really compelled me to reply this is the amount of relation it has to a story I've made up in my mind a few months back.

[saph the sergal]

yep this is just based of  what i have gone through

[Magical Machine]

Really? That's a sad thing to hear from someone writing a book like this.


 Good luck in life.

[saph the sergal]

its fine its just what i started doing one night on my pc and now its not gotten far because of life
its motly based around my time at school and that and it was thanks to someone here on the forums that would love to see the what would you do if you woke up one day as ur fursona thing

[Magical Machine]

Well, my story is mostly based off of my school life too now that I gave it some thought because mines involve a raptor being transferred to a different laboratory (Me moving from Kansas to Virgina) In this lab, things are different as the scientist there treated him as if he was expected to do things right or be punished with excruciating pain and treat him as if he was lower than them all. (Teachers in my school were just plain mean and not the nicest people. Also, I was bullied.)


And basically, there is more to it, but I want to keep it vague.

[saph the sergal]

mines about the same altho i am trying to  evide ppl when i do some more u will find out

[Magical Machine]

Alright then, I'll be sure to read it if it ever gets published somewhere.

[saph the sergal]

ok thanks thats if i even get more done

[Magical Machine]

Just to let you know, I have confidence, in you, that you'll be able to do at least a chapter.

[saph the sergal]

yep i know i hope i can do a chapter fully soon

[saph the sergal]

more of my book hehehe




Saphira had tried to remove it before but it hurt to much he had thought of burning it but that would also burn himself. what could he do to remove it he couldn't return home because he knew that there would be people in his street that would call the police again and this time they knew that they would have to knock him out to preform tests on the dragon to see if they could take the dna and use it in humans for combat reasons or take some scales to test the ability of making a exoskeleton that’s immune to fire and other numerous dangers that one can face for the time now Saphira had to get out of the warehouse he was in trouble was the only door leading out was blocked by the media "i have to get out now" Saphira told himself "i might have to wait this out" but he knew that the police would be on the way.


more to be reviled soon

[Zephyr]

This is pretty good