my poems...will post periodicly

[Joker Rose]

ok dont be hars guys....im ganna post my poems on hear...and i know they all suck but atleast someone an read them

anyway....(note: comments can be posted on this page if you wish to comment at all..and vote at the top...please :sniffle:)

poem 1

mental abuse

sitting in a pit of darkness
seeing nothing
only harshness
the smell of blood
lays on the walls
damp cold floors
conseal our souls
screams of horror
driving you insane
it penatrates the mind
those screams of pain
nothing comforting
about this place
trying to escape
the effort is a wast
we are all traped
with the torturous screams
but ive been told
its all in my dreams

Joker Rose

[Joker Rose]

poem 2

"whats wrong"

"im not crazy"
he says as the rain runs down his face
wondering how he became
so different from the  human race
disgrunteled thoughts eat at him
as he slowly fades away
back into the shadows
were he is shunned to stay
crys for help and ignorance
wishing he was dead
"am i different from the owrld?"
"or is it all in my head?"
he wonders why he cannot sleep
noctournal as the night
killing him slowly
he has no will to fight

[Arke]

Pretty good... Dark, but you didn't overdo it.

[Joker Rose]

thanx dave

[Arke]

NP

[Joker Rose]

poem 3

"fall"

fall again
with amber leaves
the smell of death
to the warm breeze
cold gusts of wind
to chill the bone
the greeting to the creatures
who all walk alone
fire, blood and rust
line the colors of the trees
wind will soon be violent
as the roaring of the seas
waving back afourth
from the cold but gentle breeze
wind chimes blairing
like the ratteling of keys
this is fall
back another year
everything seems serin
wile this season is hear

Joker Rose

[Arke]

You're just popping these out, aren't you? ((Not a bad thing...))

[Joker Rose]

actualy the last 2 i did off the top of my head but i really ment it in depression when i said i had note books full of poetry he he :snicker:

[crazeyfox]

You have good poems i make manny up just half the one's  i make pop out of my head as soon as i try to write it down, But your vearry good.

The one's i made are just random feelings

[Dr. Strange]

i luv em, very structured...well gtg, ive got ppl to piss off elsewheres.

[Joker Rose]

“Tale of two”

Cold hibernation
Hiding from the world
Danger is beyond you
For such a little girl

Cold is oblivious
To some who may enjoy
Walking with out fear
Wile others hide from this boy

Two complete opposites
Living in control
Hallow by their surroundings
Poor tortured souls

Oppressed by their elders
Never given a chance
It’s a never ending game
Ts a never ending dance

Scared to move
In fear of what they say
This girl holds on to nothing
So they play her till she pays

His sins are many
But made up for in good time
He trys to hard
But is in debt with his moral fines

Apart they are nothing
Together they can be great
But for now they are separate
And can only wait for fate

[Joker Rose]

“Her”

the one shining jewel
that caught my eye
I have to hold
and keep alive

love is to pain
as we are together
I hope that we
will never sever

without her its lonely
but to hold her is bliss
I sit and I wait
for that mesmerizing kiss

she’s precious to me
not like anything I know
cause when she’s around
i seem to let go

something she holds
nothing of art
but what she has kept
will always be my heart

i know i love her
there no doubt about that
so ill sit and ill wait
for her to come back


JokerRose

[crazeyfox]

That one was really good..your good at this stuff who knows mb one day i'll be reading yours out of a book hum?



~crazeyfox~

[Joker Rose]

hehge maby.....


nezt.....

“Winter”

Cold but to a joy
To the numb creatures of the night
Winter holds us guilty
Higher forces we do fight

Fury of the wind
Chill of the snow
This treachery  reeks havoc
On everything we know

The snow we see is empty
As the color it up holds
It blinds us to oblivion
And leaves up full of holes

Slick but fierce
It takes us down
Fast and painful
We shall drown

This hell of ice
Controls us all
Un till its gone
We wish for fall

[Rayne Blood Rose]

i LOVE it dad.i even got a pic for it