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The story line I plan on using for a game id like to make.
« on: September 16, 2014, 02:46:27 PM »
Please keep in mind I also did this as a creative writing essay so I still need to adapt it to sound more like a story line then a description of a scene form said game.

I woke up to the horrific sound of steel screeching, scraping, and the crackling of fire. I turned onto my back only to find that I was in the middle of a helicopter crash site.
I had no idea how, let alone why, never the less I had. To make matters worse I had no idea where I was. All I had to go off was my senses. I appeared to be in a forest of some kind so the possibility of coming across a wild predator was all but to high for my liking. As I tried to piece together how, where and why I was here I heard something above me start to crack. It was the canopy of trees that had been suspending the helicopter that I appeared to have crash landed. In a desperate attempt to flee from where it would no doubt land I staggered to my feet and felt a sharp, sudden unbearable pain shoot up my leg faster then a speeding bullet. Once I hit the floor I immediately crawled as fast as I could behind a tree to get away from the now plummeting
wreck of an attack helicopter. I got away from it with little to no seconds to spare. After a few minutes the pain in my leg kicked in again, probably due to the adrenaline from fleeing the incident earlier having worn off.
I lent my self against a nearby tree to put my self in a better position to get a closer look at my aching, not to mention throbbing, leg. As I lent towards my leg I noticed a slight bulge around the area of where the pain was. Along with a worryingly large patch of crimson like fluid seeping through my trouser leg. In the centre of it was a hole, no bigger than the length of a middle finger, using the already existing hole I ripped open the lower half of my trousers. I was expecting my leg to have a deep laceration but not as deep or horrifyingly disfigured as it was. Once I got a look at what the source of what the pain was the pain became infinitely worse, I was beyond the point of stoping myself from shouting a few curses at the top of my lungs. Within a few minutes, which by the way felt like an eternity, it suddenly dawned on me to look for medical supplies.
After about ten minutes I finally found some pain killers. "About damn time"
"Who said that?"
"Who do you think?" I looked around anxiously searching for signs of anyone else, anything else.
Then I saw something. A tail? No maybe I'm just seeing things, which was more then likely given the amount of blood I'd lost, I shouted in its direction.  "Hello?"
"So you did see me?"
"Who are you or what are you?"
"There's a question I don't get asked a lot..."
"Was that meant to be sarcastic?"
"Well I was going to say one of my many names but my oh my do you ask a lot of questions. For one my name is not important. What I am is."
"Well then what are you?"
"I'm a myth, a legend, a thing of destruction and pain, a spawn of the devil himself, Apparently. "
"Stop being so vague! Tell me what you are or at least tell me why I'm here, if you know."
"Unfortunately I do not know why you are here. I'm just as confused as you as to how you got here in the first place, beside flying of course." The strange, ominous, voice said as I got back up to my feet. I heard some leaves crunching, as I turned around the sound got closer and closer.
   Then I saw it the thing that I had been talking too. I instinctively through myself backwards into a defensive stance readying myself for what might happen next, for fight or flight.
"Really?" It said in a confused tone. I replied "what the hell are you?"
"Again with the questions. Is it really that difficult for you humans to look at something and be able to tell what something is?" The creature walked slowly towards me then it started to circle around me, like a wild animal sizing up it's Pray looking for a week spot to attack, as if it knew that I had next to no chance of running away from it. After five long minutes I made a move and pulled out my combat knife from its seethe on my chest and prepared myself for a fight.

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Re: The story line I plan on using for a game id like to make.
« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2014, 04:19:08 PM »
You're a good writer!  I really wanna see this game
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Re: The story line I plan on using for a game id like to make.
« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2014, 05:34:39 PM »
Thanks but I don't know how to continue from here I just can't think of it


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Re: The story line I plan on using for a game id like to make.
« Reply #3 on: September 22, 2014, 09:34:16 AM »
Am also open to co-writing.


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