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Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« on: February 11, 2008, 05:24:36 PM »
What Vivian had saw she could never forget, she grew up in a town just near Antigonish in
Nova Scotia, Halifax. She grew up on farmland so she did some of those old fashioned chores like
feeding the animals milking the cows things like that. It was a Sunday afternoon and her father had told
her to go clean out the slaughter house. She had simply nodded and picked up her  cleaning equipment
and headed over the hills of the fields that were connected to her home. The chilly winter winds nipped
at her face as she moved forwards finally reaching the doors to the slaughterhouse. The stench reached
her nose almost instantly stinging her eyes as well as her nostrils. Dropping the things in her hands she
covered her mouth and opened the door which gave a light creaking noise as she did so. She stood in
shock as she looked around the room instead of your average pig and cow parts hanging she found
the limbs of countless human beings. She bit back the bile in her throat as she stepped into the building
further more. As she took another step her foot sunk into something that also made a popping noise,
looking down at her feet she noticed it was a human heart. She could not hold it back any more as the bile
rose once more and pressed on through her lips and onto the dirt floor before her.

   Once all the way in she found the chopping block lodged into the block was a sharpened knife and
note. After reading the note she gave a simple nod to no one in particular and left the slaughter house with knife
in hand. Walking back into her home her father greeted her at the door but soon frowned as he asked her "What
are you doing with my slaughter knife." Vivian's blank expression soon twisted into a sickening grin. "Only
what you do to the countless animal's you have killed" she raised the blade as her father raised his hands in
defense "Vivian no!" he cried out but it was soon cut off as Vivian plunged the blade into his neck, the sound
of his bones shattering and the skin tearing twisted her grin even more. Throwing the body of her father to the floor
she dug the blade across his chest tearing it open and taking out the organs tossing them asunder. Licking the blood
from her fingers it became apparent that whatever was on that note had twisted her mind.

   Walking up the stairs she listened to hear where her mother was "Vivian? Why was your father yelling at you?"
was the last words that this woman would speak. Finding her mother in the shower she smiled not the pleasant smile
of your normal 14 year old girl but one you would find on a seasoned serial killer. Wrapping the shower curtains around
her mother she first suffocated her and then plunged the blade repeatedly inside the body of her mother. The fabric of the
shower curtain turned crimson. Pulling the body and the curtain from the pole it was situated on she threw it through the
open window nearby causing a bone shattering impact. She was not yet done she had one more life to take, going to
the farm hands quaters she found him writing a note. "So then what was your sick idea with murdering these people?" she
asked in an enraged tone before holding her blade to the farm hands neck "Well apparently my goal has been reached I now
have a successor don't I?" he said before leaning into the blade and taking his head clean off his own shoulders.

   Kicking the head aside she pulled out the note and read it once more "A butcher takes the lives of countless...
What difference is that from a murderer?" she shook her head in disbelief "What a moronic thing..." she said before
plunging the knife into her own chest. She lie there bleeding the same expression on her face from when she had killed
her father and mother twisted and psychotic. When the police found her body they shook their heads "I thought the
youth were supposed to be innocent?' his partner shrugged "Apparently not I mean just look at this girl." they turned to
leave but did not watch their step, tripping a wire trigged a chain effect causing barbed wire to arise around them cutting
them to pieces.


((Twisted I know >< I was in a twisted mood))
My dear there is no danger
Can't you see they turn blind eyes
To we swift and spotlight strangers?
Oh before the rush is over
We will be revered again
While the victims still recover
Oh,
Are we running toward death?
I have met him times before
He adores us like the rest
Oh even if we're discovered
Just be sure to wear your best
We will surely make the covers


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Re: Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2008, 05:19:55 PM »
Really good shorth story. You should Make more. ^_^
Thats just my opinion though.
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Re: Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2008, 03:24:50 PM »
Very good. I hope you write more because it was easy to see the events in my head. What a sick, twisted, funny story to read.
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Re: Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2008, 05:25:26 AM »
Aw you guys are so sweet thanks ^^  :sparkle:
My dear there is no danger
Can't you see they turn blind eyes
To we swift and spotlight strangers?
Oh before the rush is over
We will be revered again
While the victims still recover
Oh,
Are we running toward death?
I have met him times before
He adores us like the rest
Oh even if we're discovered
Just be sure to wear your best
We will surely make the covers


I am a Hermaphrodite and proud of it!

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Re: Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« Reply #4 on: February 16, 2008, 05:59:56 AM »
*screams in terror and runs away*

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Re: Dead bodies everywhere ((Short story))
« Reply #5 on: February 16, 2008, 07:22:47 AM »
*rofl*
Nice way to be manly, Maxis..  <<

 

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