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[Devault]

Getting rid of this, sorry.

[Dr. Strange]

Nice. Keep it going.

[Somebody]

Now you dont have to worry about that. But keep the rules in mind if you plan it to get raunchy.

[Dr. Strange]

If you posted today, yes. You can either wait until someone else comments or post the next day. Depending.

[Somebody]

Nice, its a pretty good story thus far. its nice to have another who likes to do literature we certainly need more of it

[Somebody]

Yeah well other then a few of us on this board I wouldnt exactly expect a Steven King response here either, but you write a good story. Though I'd be weary about refering to any of your characters "Crazyily screwing another" It may sound stupid but it borders the line.

[Somebody]

Nice, a little foreboding piece to keep people comming back for more. I find it fascinating really, what could possibly be in store for them. One of the better things about independant writers are they tend to be a lot less predictable because they aren't contrained by the needs of marketing and sales or a companies rules for a book.

[Somebody]

Nice, I look forward to reading more of it. it really is one of the better reads in this section for a while

[PhantomStone]

yo this is, great man, i'm hooked, wow u guys really know how to write a good story

[PhantomStone]

yo this is really cool, i'm so hooked right now, i rally like it man keep it up

[Somebody]

Yeah definately keep it up, its like reading a professional story, a good one at that

[PhantomStone]

dud this is nothing short of pure internet crack, this is worse than WOW great job man, scary and interesting, can't wait for more

[Somebody]

Awesome two chapters, things are definately heating up I cant wait to read more.

And a dragon. Nice

[Somebody]

Simply awesome. I find myself subconsciously rooting them on, particularly the snake Rellian (its that reptile affinity)

[Somebody]

Another masterful piece of story.

So is rellian really half dragon?