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"Distance" - Poem
« on: November 30, 2008, 04:15:01 AM »
This is a poem I wrote for the one I love, who would prefer I not mention a name. It's not very long and it's not one of my better works, but I still hope he loves it once he sees it.

"Distance"

Every waking moment
I miss you. 
Full of lament
My soul aches for you.
A cruel trick of fate
That I cannot see you.
An unfortunate destiny
That I cannot hold you.
Sometime I wonder
If I think of anything but you.

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Re: "Distance" - Poem
« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2008, 04:38:18 AM »
Thats a nice poem you have, I know I would love it if it were about me. Im sure the person in question loves it just as much.

Keep up the great work

 

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