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Even more poems
« on: November 30, 2008, 11:35:28 AM »
I return yet again with more poems waiting to be typed up:
Desperation
Heart pumping wildly, out of control,
Thunder crashing all around, piercing the soul.
Feet thumping and stumbling, out of the flow,
Death all around me, nowhere to go.
The demons in human form begin to close in,
Their weapons are raised, about to begin.
The memories of my lost friends fresh in my mind,
They're blocking my way, an exit is what I must find.
A thump, a step back,
It seems that hope is what I lack.
Bit by bit the darkness claims my heart,
It seems that from this world I'm about to part.

A sad smile lingers on my face...
They come closer.
Is this truly my fate!?
All hope falls further away.
I have but one last resort...
My blade is held higher.
A slash, a dash, a trickle of blood,
I sign of all I ever "was" and "could".
A hand on my heart,
A light in the dark:

The sweet embrace of the Other World.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #1 on: November 30, 2008, 11:52:12 AM »
Very nice poem Flames, you have a knack for writing them, as I said in chat I love the warrior like subject matter

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2008, 01:52:53 PM »
Thanks Tezz, I thought you might like it.

Adrenaline Rush
On the edge, heart pounding hard.
Nobody understands...
Breathing heavily, preparing myself.
A cool breeze on my forehead...
Danger, excitement, all things chaotic.
This is my life...
Limbs trembling, vision blurring,
I slowly take a step back...

A clap of thunder, a rush of wind!
One great leap is all it takes...
The rush, the energy,
It blasts throughout my blood.
My body does not fall, it hurtles!
Hurtles through cloud after cloud...
A smile brightens my face,
I am free.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #3 on: December 04, 2008, 01:42:15 PM »
An Eternal Bond
Every step we take,
All the moves we make:
We do so side by side,
Even if we push against the tide.
No matter how tough things get,
I'll never have reason to fret:
Together we'll make it through!

An Eternal Bond,
Between me and you.
No matter what happens we'll make it through,
Between us there are no lies,
None of my secrets can hide from your eyes...
We share a bond of friendship strong,
I know I can overcome anything, no matter how long!

Every problem, I've ever had,
Every solution, I'm so glad!
Every time I see you, I smile,
We can survive, mile after mile!
This bond we share, this debt I owe,
This friendship that shall never go...

My friend
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #4 on: December 04, 2008, 04:12:27 PM »
A very nice poem indeed brother. Keep it up. ^.~

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #5 on: December 04, 2008, 10:36:00 PM »
I particularly like The Eternal bond, the feelings of friendship. This friend of yours is very blessed

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2008, 11:32:21 PM »
nice job flames, urer really lucky to have a best friend like that someone to talk to whenever you need to, and he or she is lucky also, i'm happy u have a great life man, and the poems rock, i can't rhyme for my life

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2008, 11:05:36 AM »
Questions...
Tick, tock, Time goes by.
I find myself asking "Why?"
A million questions on my mind,
So many answers I'll never find.
Why, who, what, where and when?
Are often seen words scribbled down by my pen.

Tick, tock, running out of time.
A million paths to take, each without a sign.
Confusion, emotions, so much pain,
All that I've lost and still have to gain.
Shock etched into my face,
Everything halts to a standstill pace.

Why?
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2008, 01:21:59 PM »
idk flames, nice job tho. i have times like that too where it's quiet and peaceful and i'll ask ?'s and it seems no one can answer them. or i could have totaly missed what ure poem was about, if so sorry

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2008, 09:50:32 PM »
Heart split in two
The human heart is a fragile thing,
From the lowest of the low, right up to a king:
More fragile and perfect than anything else in life,
But what happens when it is pierced with strife?

My heart lies in two pieces,
This is a fault of mine.
Suffocation, dark feelings,
Emotions haunting me for all time!
I split my heart into two pieces,
You can blame this on me.
My actions and attitude,
Why didn't I see!?

A shattered soul lies upon the ground,
Surrounded by a confused crowd.
An empty husk roams this world,
An eternity of agony unfurled.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2008, 10:44:00 PM »
More nice poems, I wish I had your inspiration

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #11 on: December 23, 2008, 06:45:24 PM »
Very,... Emotional. :sniffle: I thought i was going to burst into tears, and now I don't want to go anywhere.. Nice job.
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #12 on: December 26, 2008, 10:03:02 AM »
Lonely Road
Step by step I walk,
Never in the mood to talk.
Alone, I stay on this road full of fear,
Mile after mile, year after year.
A flame, a groan, a roar of pain,
And those once close to me stare in disdain...

I cry to the heavens as I die inside,
Holding a pain my heart can never bide!
These tears, they flow like the tide,
Yet they remain trapped within my insides...

"Why!?" I roar to the skies above,
As I loose grip of all love...
"Why must I ruin everything I care about?"
"Why must I scream and shout?"
"How many lifetimes will it take:"
"For me to reach my fate!?"

Stumbling down this lonely road,
Every sign of death showed.
Liquour, drugs, magic charms,
Nothing the doctors gave me kept me calm.
How? How could I be tranquil?
It's hard enough just to be thankful.
I've lost my love, lost my friends,
This nightmare, it shall never end!

One mistake becomes two,
I never knew what to do.
Yeah, I stepped outta my place,
Yeah, I have these mistakes I'm afraid to face.
Nay, things weren't meant to be this way,
Nay, everything was supposed to be okay...

Pitter patter, it begins to rain.
A crash of thunder, so much pain.
The water rises to my knees,
All I can do is cry and bleed.
Water as dark as the void called my heart,
This foul shadow hides in every part.


It's up to my neck now and I can barely breathe,
These heavy emotions, why won't they leave!?

I breathe my last breath,
Waiting for death,
Engulfed by my own emotion,
Tainted with blood and guilt like the foulest potion...

My husk lies here forever on this lonely road.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #13 on: December 26, 2008, 12:53:14 PM »
:sniffle: Awwh...
What can I say, dear brother? It's very beautiful, but I don't like the loneliness it's showing. How to put it?... Meh. Can't place my finger on it right now, but you'll know sooner or later.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #14 on: December 26, 2008, 10:20:39 PM »
Awe, flames.....
I go by many names; Mistress of the Abandoned; King of the Shattered; Duchess of the Damned; Nightcatcher; and Dreamwatcher.
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