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Do you like warriors cats
« on: December 09, 2008, 11:41:25 PM »
Well this book is about Blue Jays its like warriors, but Blue jays, I'll post as I make it. Here is the birds

Birds of Jayclan

Leader:
Jayflight- Male

Commander:
Starwing- Male

Healer:
Steeltail- Female

Gatherers:
Songwing- Female
Duckwing- Female
Flowerwing- Male
Pathwing- Male

Fighters:
Fallenbeak- Male
Tiedbeak- Female
Printbeak-Male
Applebeak- Female
Moonbeak- Male

Hatching's:
Skyegg- Female
Seaegg- Male

Trainees:
Glidefoot- Male
Soarfoot- Female
Rockfoot- Male

Nursers:
Dockfeather- Female

Elders:
Oldhunter- Male

« Last Edit: December 10, 2008, 12:14:57 AM by Tezztor Ne'taku »

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2008, 11:43:46 PM »
lol cool i can't wait for the story

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2008, 11:54:32 PM »
Acutally, I already got chapter 1 and 2 so, here they both are!


Chapter 1

   Jayflight flew out of his nest, to call for a clan meeting. “All Blue jays old enough to scavenge for worms come to the OldBranch for a clan meeting!” Shouted Jayflight, getting all the Blue jays to fly out onto the lower branches of OldBranch.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Today we gather to make our 2 hatchings, Trainees. Skyegg and Seaegg, please come up here,” Jayflight announced. The two hatchings flew crazily up onto the OldBranch. “Skyegg and Seaegg, do you promise to take hold of the responsibility of a trainee?”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“I do,” They both said together.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Then by the powers of Skyclan, I now make you Skyfoot, and Seafoot,” Jayflight announced. “This meeting is over,”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Skyfoot! Seafoot!” Yells of happiness came from all around the group of Blue jays.
   All the birds started going back to what they were doing before the meeting was called. Oldhunter continued sleeping, and Flowerwing went back to talking with Pathwing. But, one bird stayed behind, it was Dockfeather. “I'm so proud of my two little hatchings, oops, I mean trainees,” She said sweetly, “And now its my time to become an elder, I guess I'm now Olddock,”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Thanks for everything Olddock, thanks for hatching us thanks for...” Skyfoot started listing random things his mother, Olddock, did for him and Seafoot,”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“OK, Skyfoot, We get it,” Olddock said, annoyed.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Sorry ma-ma,” Skyfoot appoligised.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“You don't call me that anymore, I'm Olddock.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“OK, Olddock,” Skyfoot Giggled.










Chapter 2

   Skyfoot flew over to the Trainees den to meet the other trainees. When she walked in, no one was there, They must be out training, I wonder when I will get my trainer, so I can become a gatherer, I know I have to wait another week, but its going to be a long one She thought, she walked out to see her brother, Seafoot, Who wanted to be a fighter.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Seafoot, why do you want to become a fighter?” She asked her brother.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Well, I just can really explain, but I just feel the urge to become one, it seems so much more fun than being a gatherer and having to go out all the time to get worms, I feel like theres more in being a fighter,” Seafoot Replied.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“That makes sense, but after you catch the worms you get to eat them!” Skyfoot exclaimed.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“But you have to feed the clan first!” Seafoot yelled.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“I know, but you still get to eat lots, for working so hard to get them,” Skyfoot pointed out.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“But you don't get to eat them until later, and the fighters get to eat before the gatherers, because gatherers do a lot of patrols, and so they need to eat more!” Seafoot fought back
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“That is true, but its not always about eating, its about serving your clan, and I think thats the most important thing a gatherer, a fighter, ever a healer could ever do!” Skyfoot said, making the most important thing they said, very important.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Wow, you're right, food isn't the most important thing, its serving the clan,” Seafoot      admitted.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Well, it looks like you guys know what you want to be, Seafoot, you will be a fighter, and Skyfoot, you will be a gatherer, I will called the meeting now,” Said Jayflight, cutting into the conversation.
   A shock of joy entered Skyfoot body, as he cheered out, “Yes!!!”
   Jayflight flew over to the OldBranch and shouted, “All birds old enough to catch there own worms gather beneath the OldBranch for a clan meeting,”
   All the birds started to gather beneath OldBranch, it looked like they thought something bad had happened. Seafoot noticed Starwing flying up onto the OldBranch, like he wanted to say something. Seafoot's body filled with nervousness of who would be his trainer.

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2008, 11:57:20 PM »
ok now it belongs in writing and litertaure  :P lol we can't win man lol

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2008, 12:19:48 AM »
Nice, keep writing.
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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2008, 01:17:55 AM »
Here's the next chapter!


Chapter 3

   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Before you start, Jayflight, I would like to make an announcement,” Starwing whispered.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Sure!” Jayflight replied.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Jayclan please listen to me, I do realize we have no nursers, but I have found this,” Starwing announced. He moved out of the way to show a small Blue jay egg, “I found this, and we have no nursers to keep it warm-”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“I am going to have eggs soon, I will do it.” Applebeak entered the announcement, flying up onto OldBranch.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Thank you Applebeak,” Said Starwing.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Its OK, since I am having hatchings soon, I might as well get an egg already,” Starwing was relieved to hear that Applebeak was ready to take an egg in, even though she might have as many as 5 more.
“Then make it be that to this day, this egg belongs to you, Applebeak, well, I should say, Applefeather,” Jayflight said, “Do you promise to uphold the responsibility's of having a hatching?”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“I do”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Then by the powers of Skyclan, I make you, Applefeather,” Jayflight announced.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Thank you Jayflight,” Applefeather thanked Jayflight for this moment.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“And with that. I have one more announcement, Seafoot, Skyfoot, come up here,” Jayflight announced. The two birds came flying up to the OldBranch, “These birds, by the powers of Skyclan, are in need of a trainer, Seafoot, your new trainer is, Fallenbeak. And Skyfoot, your new trainer is, Flowerwing.”
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“Yes!” The two Trainees exclaimed.
   Ã¢â‚¬Å“This meeting is now over,” Jayflight said, ending the meeting.

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2008, 01:19:38 AM »
Nice little story you have going. Simple yet refreshing

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2008, 01:43:09 PM »
I love the Warriors series.
It sounds pretty much just like it.

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Re: Do you like warriors cats
« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2008, 09:53:20 PM »
Very nice. I' love to do concept art for it?
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