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Offline Jaraith

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If you can dance.
« on: January 01, 2009, 07:32:47 AM »
get up get up.

kick your legs and try to tiptoe on a star.

The guy in the back row is watching, let him.

Its so hot in here, why cant we act dirty?

just let it be, just let it be, none of them are me.

Individuality is a very finite resource, lets not use it all in once place!

Beauty, Beauty, thats what the night sky is, thats what his eyes are.

Beauty, beauty, showing me whats worth living.

If only I figured it out sooner.

Beauty, beauty, thats what things lost are.
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Lets kiss and say we had something to make up for.

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Re: If you can dance.
« Reply #1 on: January 01, 2009, 04:00:41 PM »
wow, that's pretty good.
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Re: If you can dance.
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2009, 06:35:00 AM »
Pretty good I guess, it felt kinda short, to me.

Overall though I liked the feeling from it, kinda happy ending on a slightly morose note.

keep up the work ^_^
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Re: If you can dance.
« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2009, 07:47:37 PM »
still, keep it up!
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Re: If you can dance.
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2009, 08:01:09 PM »
Nice.
Keep it up :D
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