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Offline Self-sain

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Roleplay critique
« on: October 19, 2010, 08:43:06 PM »
  OK, so I think I been getting better at making serious rp's, but they never seem to bring in that much attention, and I was curious as to why?

http://www.thefurryforum.com/forums/index.php?topic=13473.0

that's a link to my newest rp (its open btw ;)) and I know it has been open to long, but I was just wondering if I could get some pointers.

I think my stuff is original, so I don't think it's that, ((unless you like the same stuff oO ))

I want complete honesty, even if its "well, its because your ideas suck", that will hurt, but I'll at least kinda of know why :P
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Re: Roleplay critique
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2010, 09:31:05 PM »
seemed a lil complicated to me. I prefer rp's that give you a more basic understanding.

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Re: Roleplay critique
« Reply #2 on: October 19, 2010, 09:33:26 PM »
Ill assume that meant to much information, or not sorted correctly, OK


Post Merge: October 19, 2010, 09:59:15 PM
I'm actually not to sure how this could be made any simpler
« Last Edit: October 19, 2010, 09:59:15 PM by Self-sain »
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