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Dark Whispers
« on: April 01, 2009, 06:14:21 PM »
Dark Whispers
Rules: Please read past posts, Keep with the story, Follow forum rules, Chose Faith ~Good~ or Darkness ~Evil~ (you can later change if you find a creative way), You may use color or other "props" for emphasis (make sure it's readable tho), remember no fight is ever easy...
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Name: Comatose
*Nickname: Data ~Either name is fine~
Gender: Female
Species: Shape Shifter
Strengths: Very good in battle, does not let pain stop her
Weapon: Claws, Magic Crystal in forehead, Sometimes other weapons
*Armor: To good at fighting to deal with clunky armor
*Extra: Makings: 3 Claw marks on eye and tail, fern in the shape of a cross on back

Silky moonlight streamed through the trees down onto a fog laden valley. Comatose (Data) prowled through the dark out side watching. This wonderful world called Phantom's Whisper meaning there would always be a whisper of hope or faith or light, etc. had been taken over by a single silhouette, a shadow, a darkness which slowly  damaged and kill all that this once had been. So far the only place left that it had not been able to grab was this misty valley where the moon always shone, Crystal Fantôme.
Now Comatose (Data) wondered if she needed help, she was usually a lone "wolf" persay... But now she felt she couldn't save this world by her self. She would try no matter what happened tho and no matter how many years.
She turned from the valley, hooded cloak flapping in the dark winds and ran into the forest...

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 06:38:18 PM »
((wow...O.o great intro))

Name: Foxx Sashihiki
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Gender: Male
Species: Red Fox
Strengths: Doesn't leave a friend behind, no matter what, and is always ready to help them.
Weapon: Enchanted one-two sword. The blade is of a silver blue color, 30 inches long and 2 inches wide. Knows some magic (Water, wind and healing)
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Foxx walked through the forest, his perked in the air, expecting something to suddenly jump at him. The young fox hid behind a tree at the sound of some rustling not far away. He closed his paws and a soft wind started to blow.
If I need, I'll send you flying... he thought, waiting for someone, or something to come out.
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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2009, 07:46:30 PM »
Name: Rosuto Catfox (last name)
Nickname: Ro, RoRo (only used by children and those close to him)
Gender: Male
Species: Kitsune
Strengths: Skilled in defense, knows a bit about herblore and healing
Weapon: Flamberge hand and a half with scotish basket, buckler sheild, light chainmail
Armor:Buckler sheild, light chainmail
Extra: Physical attributes: nine tails, oddly lacks sharp fangs and claws      Fur Coloring: Almost pure white with a very very very faint pink tint which is easiest to see at sunset and sunrise

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Bumbling through the forest quite loudly while cursing under his breath Rosuto keeps crashing through the under growth.  "God, can't friggin see, cause of that stupid brat, throwing sand in my eyes, what an awfull child."  he says as he trips over a log and slams down on the other side letting out a loud string of curses, rubbing his eyes furiously.  "When I find that kid's mother I'm going to give her a peice of my mind, raising her children to throw sand in other's eyes, sheesh, times are bad but not that bad."  he adds on as he keeps trying to get the sand out.
Read the left column then the right column

Times change, and promises are broken        |   Life is short
Life goes on and yet it stops                        |   Yet the soul is eternal
I have much to give so have this token         |   Your words a port
And get some chocolate from the shops        |   For feelings, internal

Life is short so do not wait                          |   Go seek the love
Take love by the horns                               |   Who's soul is yours
Loyalty is a wonderful trait                           |   They are your dove
But be wary of a rose's thorns                     |   Who's love is lores

Things that live                               |   Join now in the search
Must always die                               |   And find your love
Yet do not dive                              |   They'll be your perch
Into this lie                                     |   As you are their dove

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2009, 03:33:56 AM »
~Much appreciation for the complement Sash~
Comatose slows for a moment, -hum-, goes under the cover of the trees and sets paw gently but firmly on the grown. She stands on two legs and covers herself more with the cloak. The wing rustles around. But she notices more of a sound and hides behind a tree looking around. She sees a red fox tail brushing a tree slightly. She listens for a mind and hears the mumbles of somethings thoughts. She spreads the cloak into wings and glides over so as to not make a sound and changes it back as she lands in front of the creature and brings out claws "Well hello there good monsieur, are you a friend or foe?"   
« Last Edit: April 02, 2009, 03:35:47 AM by WhisperComatose »

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2009, 12:00:26 PM »
Foxx heard some sounds, closer this time. He prepared himself but a hooded figure landed in front of him making him back away from the tree. The wind got slightly stronger.
"That depends..." he started "If you are a follower of Darkness, I fear that we will fight."
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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2009, 05:58:10 PM »
"Good, Good. First time in a long time I haven't had to fight the Darkness. Now young fox, what are you doing here? What's your name?" A noise from trees away and getting louder crashes through the silence. A white figure can be seen far a away. "What is it with so many noises today? Come come, answer me then we shall see if the next living creature is ready for us and if it will live to see tomorrow." She grabs foxx's paw and then grabs him. Comatose fly s him to a small dark valley that is known for evil not always being there. She pulls him to a tall tree. "Now answer."   
« Last Edit: April 02, 2009, 06:07:04 PM by WhisperComatose »

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #6 on: April 03, 2009, 05:12:00 AM »
Name: Richard Redvale
Nickname: Richy
Gender: Male
Species: Folf
Strengths: His dedication to his friends is unequal. He is also a masterful ranger and a sly and cunning mediator.
Weapon: A stringless bow that generates elemental arrows when a drawn motion is made. A longsword and parrying dagger as well.
Armor: He wears a strong black silk outfit and dark green cloak capable of resisting any and all cuts. Doesn't protect against crushing or smashing, obviously.
Extra: Personality: He's always one step happier than all others, grinning all the time in spite of everything. He's also transcendently loyal to any he considers a friend, and will put their lives above his own.

Richard leaped from tree branch to tree branch quietly, attempting to catch up to the figure that just took off with Foxx. The Folf whispered to himself, "That kid did have an aura of unluck about him... Not surprising... But the poor guy being taken? Pffff..." he broke off and focused on keeping up with the fast kidnapper... He saw the culprit pause in a dark valley, and he hopped from the branch silently to a pad of leaves and lay panting quietly, just a few dozen feet away from the two...

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #7 on: April 03, 2009, 09:29:30 AM »
Foxx heard the sounds too and he barely kept in a scream of surprise when the hooded figure flew up in the air. He was put on the tree branch and looked at his captor.
"My family and friends were taken by this darkness. I am trying to save them." he explained "And my name is Foxx Sashihiki." he continued.
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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #8 on: April 03, 2009, 04:32:37 PM »
Getting up slowly, Rosuto hears some noise, and turns a bit to quickly toward the noise and looses his footing again, landing with a muffled 'Ooof' as well as the faint jingle of his chainmale before he gets up once more, still half blind from the sand and heads unwittingly in the direction of the valley.  Stumbling in he trips and rolls down the slope, jingling and clanging the entire way cursing his bad luck.
Read the left column then the right column

Times change, and promises are broken        |   Life is short
Life goes on and yet it stops                        |   Yet the soul is eternal
I have much to give so have this token         |   Your words a port
And get some chocolate from the shops        |   For feelings, internal

Life is short so do not wait                          |   Go seek the love
Take love by the horns                               |   Who's soul is yours
Loyalty is a wonderful trait                           |   They are your dove
But be wary of a rose's thorns                     |   Who's love is lores

Things that live                               |   Join now in the search
Must always die                               |   And find your love
Yet do not dive                              |   They'll be your perch
Into this lie                                     |   As you are their dove

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2009, 04:42:21 PM »
Foxx heard the noises and looked behind the hooded figure. He saw a white a white kitsune rolling down the slope. He moved his paw slightly and a small whirlwind formed some feet down the slope, stopping the kitsune and laying him softly on the floor.
"Are you ok?" he asked, still keeping an eye on the hooded one.
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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2009, 06:29:44 PM »
"Who said that" He replies, looking about, still disoriented by the sand in his eyes, not to mention the rolling and the whirl wind.  "Where are you!" He shouts as he gets up and sweeps his head around, trying to see the source, but with closed eyes. 
Read the left column then the right column

Times change, and promises are broken        |   Life is short
Life goes on and yet it stops                        |   Yet the soul is eternal
I have much to give so have this token         |   Your words a port
And get some chocolate from the shops        |   For feelings, internal

Life is short so do not wait                          |   Go seek the love
Take love by the horns                               |   Who's soul is yours
Loyalty is a wonderful trait                           |   They are your dove
But be wary of a rose's thorns                     |   Who's love is lores

Things that live                               |   Join now in the search
Must always die                               |   And find your love
Yet do not dive                              |   They'll be your perch
Into this lie                                     |   As you are their dove

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #11 on: April 03, 2009, 06:50:13 PM »
*Growl* Comatose feels  presents in trees around them only hoping that it isn't a servant of darkness. *Purr* "Ok, Foxx I swear I'll help you get your family back little one, only if you wish to have my help. And now you kitsune answer him, are you alright? I will tell you where we are once you tell use what or whom you follow." She then covers herself and Foxx just to make sure the presents in the trees and the unlucky kitsune are not going to start a fight.. Then she flinches at the open wound on her back but hides the pain. "So, answer..."
« Last Edit: April 04, 2009, 01:26:42 AM by WhisperComatose »

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #12 on: April 04, 2009, 12:53:20 AM »

Name: Riku Blackhawk
Gender: Male
Species: Snow leopard
Strengths: he has mastered the art of deception and cunning, very intelligent. He is also skilled with a spear and blade, has a slight control over fire (e.g. can create fireballs and manipulate fire on a small level)
Weapon: Enchanted spear 'Shadowclaw**' and two short swords
*Armour:Black Plate armour on shoulders and legs, chain mail shirt covering torso, plate boots and bracers
*Extra: Disposition: he normally travels alone and isn't used to company, also he doesn't like to be touched, Large scar down his back, can be seen through his mail shirt.

**The enchantment on shadowclaw is that it is both light and incredibly tough, nigh-on indestructible, and wounds inflicted by the spear take substantially longer to heal and do not respond to any healing ointments or medicines save either powerful healing magic or by a master alchemist
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Riku walked on the forest path, his mind mulling over what had happened a few miles ago. He stopped to wipe the gore off his spear and face as it was beginning to dry. Once he had finished he heard a commotion further down the path, from the voices he guessed there were around four of them, give or take one. Stepping off the road, he continued in amidst the trees and bushes, keeping out of sight. He stopped about thirty feet from the potential enemies, far enough not to be spotted, but close enough to overhear some conversation.


I hope you will remember me, At least say so to comfort me, You say goodbye so easily, Its now or never, It may seem really pitiful, But life became too beautiful, The pain of love unbearable, It's now or never, Gone Forever.

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #13 on: April 04, 2009, 01:00:26 AM »
Richard gasped when the mysterious figure put a cover over her and Foxx, and against his better judgement, he ran out into the open in plain sight. He slapped himself in the forehead and froze in his tracks...

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Re: Dark Whispers
« Reply #14 on: April 04, 2009, 01:23:53 AM »
"A wolf? A fox? Oh dear now what do we have? Your turn, who in the heck are you. Hiding from us. Not wise to jump out amitsed possible enemy's. Who are you and are you an enemy? Don't think your off kitsune." Comatose backs up a slight bit and whispers "Are you ready for the possible battle?" She feels presents far off getting closer but has to ignore it for a few moments until she figures out about the odd amount of creatures in the valley.

 

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