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Song I made
« on: December 09, 2010, 01:17:15 AM »
I made a song today, I was wondering if someone could give me some feedback on it.

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Re: Song I made
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2010, 03:32:58 AM »
Pretty good, but the part near the end sounds familiar for some reason...

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Re: Song I made
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2010, 03:37:10 AM »
Yeah, I couldn't think of a good ending so I fooled around with some common C chords.
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Re: Song I made
« Reply #3 on: December 12, 2010, 04:56:06 AM »
Idk why... but the 'hook' sounds quite failure
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Re: Song I made
« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2010, 04:00:02 PM »
I'm no composer, I just wanted to give it a try. ^_^
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Re: Song I made
« Reply #5 on: December 12, 2010, 04:27:03 PM »
I'm sorry >< I mean familiar
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Re: Song I made
« Reply #6 on: December 12, 2010, 04:39:48 PM »
Oh, well in that case...

I've had people tell me that before, I didn't try to copy it from anywhere though.
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Re: Song I made
« Reply #7 on: December 13, 2010, 01:09:56 AM »
Its natural for someone to subconsciously copy or repeat to some degree something they heard before
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