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Constructive Criticism?
« on: September 16, 2010, 02:09:01 AM »
Yeah, it's been a long time since I've drawn anything really, and this is probably the first anthro I've actually ever drawn that isn't Yoshi, so I want some constructive criticism on how I drew my fursona, please.

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Re: Constructive Criticism?
« Reply #1 on: September 16, 2010, 02:51:19 AM »
It looks good... The feet look funny to me... But feet are REALLY HARD to draw   >w<;;
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Re: Constructive Criticism?
« Reply #2 on: September 16, 2010, 12:41:41 PM »
It's not bad, but try to get some proportions going on. look at the proportions of a human and draw a basic shape that has the right proportions,  before going into a full on drawing.
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Re: Constructive Criticism?
« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2010, 02:01:30 AM »
Yea, the proportions are a bit off on the piece; the body should be like 6 1/2 - 7 heads tall, and the whole character dosn't look like he's facing one way because of the pant's crotch. Ummm... The tail should flow more, like a bunch of fur... That's all I can think of. Its good overall for your first time though. :D
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