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Offline HyenaKing

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Constructive Critisism
« on: September 21, 2013, 04:19:48 PM »

WHAT DO I NEED TO IMPROVE!?
Constructive Criticism please
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Re: Constructive Critisism
« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2013, 04:46:53 PM »
Well, your coloring seems a bit rushed. You colored outside the lines in many places, and the coloring is quite squiggly and incomplete. The shape is also quite jagged with lots of sharp edges.
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Re: Constructive Critisism
« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2013, 04:51:19 PM »
Thanks man, In all honesty, i rushed the coloring.
I'm fixing that now.

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