Thoughts on my sketch?

[SnarlingMink]

I sketched this up a few days ago (I really do mean sketch. 15 minutes, this isn't a high quality thing  ) and I'm wondering what people think? I apologize in advance for the awkward placement of the head-shot type thingy... it was spur of the moment 


http://brokendialect.deviantart.com/art/Louise-555811216

[HollowOfHaze]

I think you did very well for such a small amount of time. I really wish I could draw that well given any amount of time.

One piece of criticism: I would give more detail to the wing structure. A thicker base where they meet the back, and some definition to any joints in their bone structure.

[SnarlingMink]

Thank you so much! I'll make some adjustments, and hopefully then it'll look a bit better! I really, really appreciate the critism, oh my goodness! 

[Zane the Fox]

I would say while it great for a quick work. One of the wing look broken. And the head is a little too big. Maybe if you lengths the head out, it would fix better...hmmm. The arm and leg look abit skinny t point that it might not hold a lot. Just add a little more depth to the muscle otherwise. It great