errr, it's nice and all. The pictures flow with the music generally well, I like that. Maybe you could make it more dynamic and exciting with a little bit of movement so that it matches the ebb and flow of activity in the song.
also, get a theme. I know the theme is "I'm a furry!" but it's like trying to grab everything from everywhere. That idea is too big, narrow it down, make a theme, make it work.
oh yeah and maybe you could tone down on the sexy. When you start taking images from FurAfterDark, you gotta wonder what kind of message you're putting out. But then that's just my personal opinion on the matter. Cute and childish and fun shouldn't thrown in with busty girls wearing not much.
but yeah this is a great starting point, advance, improve and work hard. You got some idea for musical timing so use that to your advantage.
