Tales of Anthria!

[Tobi-wan]

Hey, prospective readers!
I've been creating a fictional world inside my head for many weeks now. I've been jotting down notes about it, sketching maps and compiling a fictional culture and history comprised of Gods, folk heroes, myths and quite a lot of idiocy. I wrote a short story on it and quite liked how it turned out. This made me plot out the key points to a much longer and fuller story. I loved how it sounded so much i've started to write it out in chapters. I'd love to hear what y'all think!

It's a fictional world, VERY loosely based around D&D, but don't let that put you off! It was really just used for character influence. Set in and around the continent of Anthria, it's a world of magic, murder, animals and alliterations. There'll be thrills, there'll be romance! There might even turn out to be a joke, but don't hold your breath. 

I'm obliged to warn of moderate language and quite a lot of violence, but not really graphic.

Ahem. Links, anyone?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3521836 The first chapter.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3530214/ Chapter two. Spot the Terry Pratchett reference and win an internet! (It's pretty obvious)

I'm also releasing character biographies betweentimes. Only one has been completed so far, but expect another one soon. (Read the stories before the biographies, it helps  )

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3525808/ Biography 1 - Janus

Thanks, and don't be afraid to tell me which bits are rubbish.

[Asia Kali Yusufzai]

I passed this by back when I was focusing on my work. I'll read it tomorrow.