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The Beginning of Our End.
« on: July 21, 2011, 05:57:33 PM »
It's been a while since I put any effort into working more on this roleplay. I got the idea a few months ago and it just keeps popping in and out of my head. Well I finally brought it back up to the surface of mein mind and finished writing an introduction story, along with deciding on a name. The name was a huge problem for me. It's literally taken all this time to come up with, and I'm still unsatisfied with how it turned out. But I can't complain because it's progress and that's what this roleplay needs.

Originally this roleplay was going to be made in the Adult Area, but I doubt anyone there would be interested in something constructive or mature. So here it shall be established! If you happen to browse the AA then you'll know about this roleplay, maybe.... that being the case please do not reveal anything to those others who may wish to join. That's just poor sportsmanship.

As more of the story is formed I will reveal the necessary points. But for now you'll have to deal with this:

Furry kind has always been a race of violent nature. Ploughing through the galaxy, leaving nothing but destruction in their wake. Even in this modern day and age, petty conflict creeps into peoples lives. One would think that after many years of evolution, we'd have something better to do than kill each other. But just like recurring herpes this disease shows its ugly face.

For those of you who use the Earth calender, the current year is 2411. For those who are familiar with the time table most commonly used with the spacing organizations, it is 6 phases past the 2nd Tier. Starting back in the first Tier, or around the year 2200, Furry kind made possible extended space travel. With the new capabilites brought forth by science they were able to further explore other planets. The first planet to be explored by Furry kind in person was Mars. There they had made colonies, sprouting up all over the planets surface. After about 25 phases of colonization, or 50 years, mining operations had begun. It didn't take long before a whole host of new elements were discovered. These new elements were placed into a new periodic table under the name of Crodia. Crodian elements brought forth even more possibilities for science, making lasting artificial biomes a reality. New space vessels with almost limitless travelling capabilities were created using this new set of elements.

Up until then the Mars colonies were under the control of the most powerful organization on Earth. The Senate Of Nations, or SON, was comprised of a majority of the world powers. With their combined influence it soon became the closest thing ever to a world government. But the Mars colonies saw themselves as something very seperate from any Earth politics, and deserving of their own form of government. It was soon realized that the new technologies formed from Crodia were their chance for independence. With better terraforming methods and more deadly weapons, Mars saught to overthrow the Earth based government. SON did not expect a sudden uprising and was quickly driven from the planet. Though Mars was greatly outnumbered, it was easy for them to declare seperation from Earth. With SON forced back to its homeworld Mars was free to create its own government. They expected that with their new technologies they would become the greater power in the solar system. With that in mind they rightfully named themselves Space Parliment of Economy and Commerce, or SPEC. Truely they were a speck in the vastness of space. Especially compared to Earth, but dispite their small size they quickly became very self sufficient and powerful.

There was only one problem that came out of this entire affair. SON would not have it. They were threatened and saught to stomp SPEC out before it could grow any further. The resulting conflict was devistating. Throughout a Tier of history war was waged. Both planets were raveged and made uninhabitable. Furry kind was being made extinct. As the worlds smoldered under their own hate and lust for power, they realized it was the end. No more could life be sustained in this solar system, and SPEC made preparations to leave for deep space. But as it is said, "It takes the worst to bring out the best in us." And so SPEC lent a hand to those left alive on Earth. Together the two enemies made out for new worlds in which to call their home.

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This is my introductory post for what I hope will turn out as an epic and tragic sci-fi. It's probably going to be some time still before this roleplay is playable. See, I'm not too familiar with participating in a roleplay, let alone making one. So I'll do my best. Though I would like to ask for help from anyone who would be willing to lend some. Make a post asking what I might need help with and I'll enlighten you.
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Re: The Beginning of Our End.
« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2011, 06:05:08 PM »
Oh man, this sounds awesome! I would offer you help but I don't think you really need it. It sounds great so far :) Can I reserve a spot for when it starts?
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Re: The Beginning of Our End.
« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2011, 06:26:18 PM »
Yes, of course you can have a spot Gelidus  :D

And you'd be surprised at how much help I actually need. Like, I'm not sure how much of the story I should tell before letting people in. I want them to be interested, but there are huge plot changes being planned later on. Some people would join and enjoy how things go at first, but lose interest as things progress. And, I don't know how to let the roleplay unfold. Should I make chapters? Should I make predefined characters? Should I set a limit to the amount of people allowed in? Should it only take place once every week. Less often than that, more often? I'm really confused about a lot of this. It's taken this long for me to get this far with the decision making. I can't imagine trying to decide all that.
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Re: The Beginning of Our End.
« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2011, 07:35:13 PM »
Ultimately thats all up to you. It's your first RP so all you can do is do the best you can. I've never created an RP before so I'm probly not the best person to give advice. But I think you've got enough plot, history, and effort put into it that nobody is going to join and than leave mid-way through it. And if they do, you can just take over their character or kill it off. Were you planning on doing the RP on the chat or in the forums? Doing it on the chat may be hard to get everyone to join at the same time, but it would go alot faster. Just do what you think would be best and what makes sense. Thats all the humble I can give you :/
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Re: The Beginning of Our End.
« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2011, 11:51:22 PM »
Im so interested in this RP.. love this kind of stuff.. space ships, all that. I have a double character of my fursona, 1 from 18th centry, and 1 from theses times, both cpts of a ship.. So what exactly do u need help with?
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Re: The Beginning of Our End.
« Reply #5 on: July 31, 2011, 08:24:05 AM »
I'm not happy with the title and I'd like to have it changed. If you could give suggestions on a new name that would be so helpful! It should reflect the dark nature of the story as this is a sad tale.

Since I first started conceiving this roleplay it has changed a lot, but it's finally turning into a finished product. I have the general story thought through and I'll post the first bit soon. Maybe even have it up sometime today. I've decided that instead of making preset characters, players will be making up their own.

This roleplay is going to take place on the starship Rayonik a good 20 years after its departure from the ruined solar system. I'm looking for someone to interrogate me about the roleplay so I can answer their questions and write down notes. It would help me to get things together and have things fine tuned.

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