Feedback..this is off the top of my head

[Firekitty]

Zam, A chubby black and purple cat, awoke with a start. the dream had to be real. It was so vivid. He was in a warzone. His friends were dead. He saw it. Someone raised his Colt to Zam's head...and shot. That was when he woke up. then he realized, there was a sound, thud! thud! thud!
"Hey! Zam wake up." someone said. He recognized the voice, it was his "Friend" he lived with. Zam got up, walked to the door and opened it. There stood another cat, this one slender, and all white.
"What Sinclaire? I'm trying to sleep."
"It didn't sound like that to me." Zam was taken aback by this, What did he mean?
"What." His voice sounding suddenly worried
"You were yelling." This had freaked Zam out. He was sleeping, you don't yell in your sleep!

[LilyBunnie]

I like what you started writing here, Its rather creative and i would really like too keep reading it. That is if you ever decided to finish it.