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My first long text/story.
« on: November 20, 2013, 09:17:56 AM »
Hi! This is my first long text/story. just so everyone knows, I'm from Sweden and my english is not so good. So if I have spelled wrong or something is grammatically incorrect, please tell me.


Chip and Pierce
 
Chip is a Canine/fennec/fox who is gay and he likes to dress himself girly he also got a collar and ear-piercing. Eyes purple, Hair white/black/purple, Fur white. He is good at drawing,making music. He is Emo or something that reminds about Emo.
 
 
Pierce is a canine/fennec/feline/cat/fox who is gay he dress himself normal (not girly). Eyes blue, Hair black/red, Fur light gray. He is also good at drawing and making music. He is Emo or something that reminds about Emo. He is a demon that can see or feel others emotions.
 
 
"Move you idiot!" Chip looks behind him and he sees a big guy running towards him. Chip jumps to the right to avoid the big guy. The big guy runs past him and before Chip even can react do three other big guys run past him. Chip sighs and says to himself "why am i even here..?" He opens a door and he walks into a classroom and he sits down on a chair in the darkest corner in the room. The teacher enters the room and everybody becomes quiet. "Everybody knows what they shall do?" The teacher looks around in the room. Everyone nods then do they pick up pencils and brushes and other painting stuff. Chip thinks to himself "Now i remember why i am here... the music and art class on this school are really good." Chip takes up a drawing of a heart on fire and starts to color it. When there has been a half-hour of the class is there suddenly a knock on the classroom door. The teacher Mr. Robertson goes and opens the door. He talks to someone then does he walk back to his desk and walking behind him is there a guy Chip never seen before and Chip's first thoughts about this new guy is "wow...he is really cute". Mr. Robertson tells everybody to stop drawing. "Okay class this is Pierce" he points on the new guy "He will join your class so be nice to him". Chip hears that a few of the girls have starting to talk to each other about how sexy and cute Pierce are. Nobody knows that Chip is gay and he returns to color the heart on fire. Suddenly does someone walk up to him. He looks up and he sees that it is Pierce. "What do you want?" does Chip ask. "Can I sit here?"  Pierce points on the chair next to Chip. Chip nods and thinks "He is even cuter close up…" Pierce looks at him and smiles and it looks like he is blushing a little. Chip thinks "Wait did i say that out loud?" He looks back at Pierce but he is not blushing anymore and he has started to draw an old house on a paper. When the class is over do many of the girls walk over to Pierce and they give him compliments about his drawing and other things. Chip feels a little bit jealous and thinks "I wish that i could do like the girls and just walk up to him and hug him and be all over him just like the girls" Chip stands up and he leaves the classroom.
 It's autumn and the leaves are starting to change color from green to yellow. It is Friday and Chip is walking through the forest that is between the school and the student home. They live 17 guys in an 18 person house. Chip have not notice it but someone is following him. He is almost home now, he can see the student home when suddenly he hear something. Chip turns around and before he even has time to react does someone runs straight into him and both fall to the ground. "Oww...” Chip recognizes the voice. He opens his eye and on top of him is Pierce laying. "Are you okay?" Chip tries to make contact with Pierce. "My head…it hurts" Pierce sits up and he looks around then, he looks down and he blushes. "Sorry!" Pierce gets off Chip. "It's okay" says Chip as he sits up." Are you hurt?" Chip looks at Pierce " No but you are" He points on Chips arm. Chip looks down on his arm and he sees that one of his self-harm scars has open up. He puts his hand over the scar to hide it. “You know that self-harming is not good” Pierce stands up and he tries to help Chip up, but Chip just pushes his hand away. “I don’t need your help” Chip stands up and he starts to walk towards the student home but after a few meters does he fall down on the ground again. “Are you sure that you don’t need my help?” Pierce runs over to him and helps him up. Chip does not say anything and he lets Pierce help him to the student home and when they get inside do Chip go to his room but before he enters do he scream “Guys we got a newcomer in the hall!” Suddenly before Pierce even can react is there a lot of voices in the student home and soon are there 16 persons in the hall that wants to say hi and welcome Pierce.

 

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