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how was the story?

great i luved it wright more
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good you did good
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it was pritty good but not for me
0 (0%)
it was ok,but keep righting
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bad,horroable don't write more
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Offline AlphaDarkWolf

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short story
« on: July 26, 2007, 11:36:52 PM »



 my little story:i howl at the moon in pain, "why god why do you treat me so"i cryout.cring with blood stains on my jet black fur as a tear falls next to the moon marking  near my eye. next i hear a foot step. i turn to say " back off i'm not in the mood to fight agian with a fellow wolf!" here it is that i snarled at kiba my love and only one who trust me so. we stair at each other my blood red eye's meet to his ice blue eye as it rains, my fury claims down and my hart beat slows to a normal drum sound. his snow white fur wet and damp from the rain drips off, i say in a upset mood " kiba deer i..i'm sorry that i snaped at you." has i run to him and our wet fur meets. i nuzzle him. but not yet has he said any thing i get worried. i back down a bit to give space then he says" it's not your falt ur mad, but i have bad news." my face turns pale and my eyes gray" your mother and brother are dead." he say " what and how?!" i said in a low upset voice.
"your father! your father has killed them why i do not  know but all i know is that their gone and the only ones here with you is me and your to sisters  sammie((kailey)) and karu,shaphera deer i'm sorry i did what i could,and i still tast your fathers blood." he walked to me and huged me and said it's ok i'm here, i looked at him and said " i luv you and always will luv you." As i put my head on his shoulder he said " i luv you to much,too lose you my darlling saphera."

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« Last Edit: August 03, 2007, 04:48:14 PM by AlphaDarkWolf »
howl at the moon in pain, will i ever be loved?

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Re: short story
« Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 08:29:56 PM »
aww.. so sweet. me luvs it. now go check mine out.
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Re: short story
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2007, 02:29:59 PM »
awwwwwwwwwwwwww I luved ur story!! :sparkle:

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Re: short story
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2007, 02:40:56 PM »
i look at him as our fur touches i put my head down on his cheast whanting to cry but the tears wont fall. u looks at and pats my back trying to comfort me,i walk away and go to the edge of a cliff and stand there "why do you whant to help me?" i don't kno why i'm saying this, "well uh...dear uh..."he said confused."well why why do u what to help me!" oh god SHUT UP SAPHIRA! i thought to my self."cuz i love u and i don't what to see u hert." he said i little upset. i start to cry,oh now u cry saphira.ugh i hate mood swings, i thought. he stands there in the rain just looking at me.still at the cliff i whant to jump off but idk i'm confused.



((help me i can't think of any thing of anthin else!!!))

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Re: short story
« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2007, 08:29:25 PM »
reread it a few times and think of nothing, it helps a little. i've had writers block before...
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Re: short story
« Reply #5 on: August 31, 2007, 01:42:20 AM »
ok i try

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