That's really hard to say, but I would think you would aim for something unique on the character that separates it from other characters people see on a day-to-day basis.
To be honest, my original idea wasn't like this and the gesture was really different, but since the character description said some stuff he liked, I tried to make a mix and make him look more natural. Yeah, that's it.
Okay, now that I see the reference, you're definitely close to it. It is just a weird design to begin with. I'd still recommend a little more definition in the torso, arms, and legs though so it looks like there's more "structure" under there.
Like obviously it's a thin character, but the chest looks extremely thin. Rib cage removed and anorexic thin.
I will add a extra layer of ink to make it don't look like that and I will try to define better the body (I really need to learn anatomy basics, lol). Thank you a lot for your help!
Dragon taurs are adorable. I really like all I've seen. My only suggestion I can think of for scenes, like the bike, if a strong LOA. Which, I can't even follow myself, and seems decent in most pictures anyway.
I think that they're really cute too, there is some art of the character that looks amazing. That's a great advice, I really didn't thought about it and I don't think I follow too much.
These are great. I really love that third picture. The line art is fantastic.
Aww, thank you a lot! You're really sweet!