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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #45 on: March 12, 2009, 08:47:16 PM »
Uncertain Unrest
Lying down in the eternal night,
Forever without a welcome light:
Tossing and turning hour after hour,
Then motionless as I lose all power.
Suddenly consumed by my fears,
Unable to even shed my tears:
An endless storm of uncertainty,
A million worries consuming me!

(Oooh!)
Are you all gonna be okay?
Can you last but another day?
Too many questions, too little time,
Unable to go back and undo my crime.

Forever afraid, always unsure,
I have yet to find my cure:
Struggling against inner demons, strong,
Is this torturous void where I belong?
A shell made hollow by, sudden fears,
A husk formed over all these years:
Endless barrages of illogical worries,
There's not long left, I must hurry!

(Oooh!)
Are you all gonna be okay?
Can you last but another day?
Too many questions, too little time,
Unable to go back and undo my crime.

These shadows are al, I have ever known,
I should have seen that I'd always be alone:
Slowly rotting piece by piece, sadly,
If there was a way to end it, I'd do so gladly!
A rush of tears like the tide,
A sorrow I cannot ever bide:
This lifetime of fear and regret,
A milion and more things I'll never forget!

(Oooh!)
Are you all gonna be okay?
Can you last but another day?
Too many questions, too little time,
Unable to go back and undo my crime.

(Oooh!)
You shouldn't worry if I'm okay,
Just try and last to the next day.
Too many shames of mine for all of time,
Forever unable to undo...my crime.

<Complete!>
« Last Edit: March 16, 2009, 03:52:51 PM by Flames of FireWind, Reason: Complete poem at last »
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #46 on: March 14, 2009, 09:11:01 PM »
excellent poems, Flames.
I have to say the "My life, my pain" one is my favorite. :)
you're definitely way better than me.
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #47 on: March 14, 2009, 09:27:34 PM »
even better than me.
I go by many names; Mistress of the Abandoned; King of the Shattered; Duchess of the Damned; Nightcatcher; and Dreamwatcher.
but I am untamed and therefor
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #48 on: March 16, 2009, 08:29:00 PM »
excellent poems, Flames.
I have to say the "My life, my pain" one is my favorite. :)
you're definitely way better than me.
Why thank you, I appreciate the compliment. "My life, my pain" is probably the one poem/song I put the most work and effort into and I'd like to think it shows. :'(

even better than me.
Nah...Well maybe...But I doubt it.

Even better than me too...oh wait XD

In any case, "Uncertain Unrest" is finished now and I might just have a new poem soon...
« Last Edit: March 16, 2009, 08:33:00 PM by Flames of FireWind »
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #49 on: March 16, 2009, 08:39:52 PM »
oh! I like the sound of that!
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #50 on: March 20, 2009, 08:31:08 AM »
Eh, I'm updating later than I would like but it's been hard for me to write anything at all lately. I shall get back to updating FireWind Chronicles and The Chronicles That Time Forgot (and Oneshot Collection too) eventually, just don't hold your breath.

Facing the Voices
It feels like an eternity since it began,
A lifetime in which I only turned away and ran.
Trapped in a cage yet still I try to flee,
Blinded, in confusion, unable to see!
I keep hearin' these voices, they're callin' my name:
I can't help but wonder if my life ain't some twisted game,
They keep callin' softly whilst others cry out in pain,
They are the ones I try to ignore in vain.

A confusion so great,
This agony caled fate:
Forever warping my dying mind...
As all hope leaves me behind!
I can't think anymore, I don't know what I'm here for;
I'm simply afraid, my body a husk on the floor...

I can't flee nor can I live this way,
It's been too long since I was even close to okay.
I'm losing my mind, or maybe it's already lost to the darkness...
Only thing I know is that I'm in a pitiful mess!
These voices I hear 'em everytime I sleep,
They're always taunting me whenever I weep,
I can't recognise them yet they still call for me,
I'm locked in my own emotions, without a key!

<More to come?>
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Re: Even more poems
« Reply #51 on: April 13, 2009, 09:17:45 PM »
Conflict then Silence
Another day, more drama unfolds,
The likes of which legend had not foretold.
Each moment that passes,
(from ashes to ashes)
I must do what I must.
(from dust to dust)
Sorrow, pity, anger, resentment,
Depression and bewilderment.
Arguements and tension, stress all the while:
Piece by piece the conflicts will pile.

I can never win, it's just another day...
Of trying but failing to make things okay.
A thousand mistakes,
Several acts of fate:
And it only ends worse than it begun...
What have we done?
One by one we can only fall,
It seems it's not the time to stand tall...

The smoke has cleared, there's only silence now,
I stare sadly and can only ask myself how?
How did it come to this, it ended so badly...
If I could fix this I'd do so gladly,
But the silence is there,
It hurts so much to care:
This silence more painful than any wound,
It seem sthat we are...doomed.
The farewell was premature. My definite stay is not definite. The constants are variable. The greeting was too late.

 

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