A song to my love

[Noke]

This is a song i wrote for my love i hope you enjoy.

http://www.futurewii.com/I%20Never%20Knew.mp3

It's called I Never Knew

Tuning: Open A Minor

G      Cs  G
When I met you
  Cs
I knew
G            Dm
That you and me
      C       G7
Were meant to be

         G
From the moment I saw you
Cs
I was awed
G                       Dm      C
I knew you were sent to me from God
    G                  Cs
And I never knew what love could be
G                      Dm      C
Until your love rained down on me

       G
I'm in love

     G     Cs
When I am down
  C
I say
     G          Cs
That when i see you
     G             C
everything will be okay

Cause (and) when I see you my day is bright
You turn the darkness into light
You fill my life with all this love
The good lord sent you from up above

(repeat first chorus then secong chorus replacing cause with and)

[[D.E.M] zetsumei]

very nice ^^

if i have to give some form of critique, your vocal was nice, but could use some work, and i recommend recording guitar and vocal separately so you can change the mix to make the vocal easier to hear, its how all the pros do it, and it works to turn gold into crystal.

other than that, really good, you're skilled

[Noke]

tyvm, and yeah im gonna re record it soon

Post Merge: April 08, 2009, 11:03:21 PMI re recorded the song, i kinda mumble in one spot, but other than that...  the old link had simply been replaced with this http://www.futurewii.com/I%20Never%20Knew.mp3

[Dog Donovan]

Good job Craig. I'm proud of you. :-*

[Noke]

i want to get this song out more,even just on the forums, i want people more peoples true opinions!

[kayle]

Hey, sounds good.  I'm usually not one for acoustics, but it was actually really good.  Keep it up!