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Offline BigBadDawg

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My one and only poem
« on: January 21, 2010, 06:08:26 AM »
I'm not good at writing poetry, but there was one that I wrote that was in my school's literary magazine...

Skin Deep

Awaiting the time I can shed my false exterior
And reveal my true form and what lies within my soul
Bathing in the silvery light of a moon that is swollen
The time has come
My flesh burns
  My muscles twitch
   My bones pop
I am filled with ectasy
To finally be rid of this useless shell
My skin tears away
To show what lies beneath
My senses shift
The smell of the crisp night air
  The sight of the dark sky littered with stars
   The sounds of the insects chirping
I fall to the ground
My hands form into claws
  My teeth into fangs
   My skin to fur
A howl escapes my lips
As I am finally be able to stretch in my true form
I take one last look at the world I once knew
Then I disappear into the darkness
"Of all the things I lost, I miss my mind the most." ~ Ozzy Osbourne

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Re: My one and only poem
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2010, 08:09:34 AM »
That was great.

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Re: My one and only poem
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2010, 05:03:05 PM »
that weren't bad at all. Better than at least half of the poems posted here. so well done.
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Re: My one and only poem
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2010, 05:10:40 PM »
Thanks, both of you  ^_^
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