much better movement with the song, playing with the rhythm, I like that.
but 11 minutes is waaaaaaay too long. I was dragging at 4 minutes
I see you're not gonna avoid the sexy, and that's your choice, good on you.
Also, be careful about the quality of the image you use. There are some proper low quality ones in there and even one that says "THUMBNAIL" at the top. Oh yeah and try to avoid repeating images unless there's a good reason to.
But overall, I rather liked it, especially when spotting the work of some of my favourite artists. Good job.