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Offline Kodachi Devil

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story prologue, hope it has potential.
« on: August 12, 2010, 10:34:08 PM »
On October 26th, 1999, 3 seemingly unconnected murders took place.  Okami's Tyuyoki's brother was killed in a robbery, in Tokyo Japan.  In Fall River, Rhode Island, Jake Turners mother was killed in a hit and run, and in Wales, England, Will Matthewson's best friend went missing, and was found dead a year later.  Now it is October 19th, 2010, and these three people will be brought together, and their lives will change forever.

that's all.

I have around the first 15 chapters planned in my head though.

character ages:
Jake is 11.
Okami is 15.
Will is 21.

its part supernatural thriller, part murder mystery~
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Re: story prologue, hope it has potential.
« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2010, 10:40:00 PM »
Sounds like it has LOTS  of potential to me... But I'm not that good of a source...
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Re: story prologue, hope it has potential.
« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2010, 10:51:46 PM »
Cool little advert, and yes there is definitely a story to be told there... question is whether you can tell it. I'd  love to read more.
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Re: story prologue, hope it has potential.
« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2010, 11:42:10 PM »
YAY! I'll try my best to deliver, then!
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