Poetry time.

[Wyatt Godfrey]

I kinda wanna post some of my poems on here, and I wanna also get some advice on how they are, here is my first one! I will post more poems if this tread gets popular, and thanks for reading!

20 years.

Where do I see myself in 20 years?
Probably driving cars and drinking beers.
I'll be drawing pictures and playing guitar,
and nearby, not that far,
will be the wilderness, with brush and trees.
Great tall Aspens with blooming leaves.
I might have a wife and some children,
watching them play in the playpen.
Me and my wife will be philanthropists,
sure, it's hard, but worth the risk!
And we will grow old, shrived, withered,
our children will grow strong and have learned,
we are all together, living as one,
and if we split up, we will be none.
I will die, and lie in my coffin,
might go to hell for all my wrongdoing.
But I don't know, we'll have to see,
when time is past and I take my leave.
You don't have to think now, but think near,
what will you do, in 20 years?

[WingedZephyr]

Not bad. The rhyming could use a bit of work in some places, but it was enjoyable to read.