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Re: Drake's Writing Thread!!
« Reply #45 on: May 31, 2011, 12:32:49 AM »
I'd like to hear it :3 if you want I think I have an old (unrefined) copy of the first few chapters of my novel, but those are the ones that I haven't edited.
the one I did major edits on is on my laptop...which is not in my possession right now.
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Re: Drake's Writing Thread!!
« Reply #46 on: May 31, 2011, 12:37:41 AM »
Sure! PM it to me; I'll do the same for F&I.

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Re: Drake's Writing Thread!!
« Reply #47 on: May 31, 2011, 02:19:57 AM »
Excellent work Drake, your pacing and story devolpment is really what keeps making me read, it's what keeps me interested in a story for sure.
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« Reply #48 on: June 20, 2011, 08:18:50 AM »
woof, it's been a while since I've updated my story. I bet nobody even remembers what the story is about after all this time XD this part I wrote I wrote at 2am so it's crap, bear with me X3

   I stumbled backwards in shock. The Reaper leered down at me in sheer malevolence as I fled back to the manor as if the manor could protect me from that ominous demon. I staggered up to the front door and dug in my pocket for my key. There had to be at least one place in this world where I was safe from the Reaper.
   The lock clicked and I opened the door to find Vic standing there staring at me with a feverish look upon his face.
   "Oh Vic, I wasn't expecting you to be..." I never got to finish my sentence as Vic slammed me against the wall.
   "What the hell Vic?" I exclaimed as I was held in Vic's iron grip.
   Vic seemed to be gasping for air now, as if he had run a marathon as he kept me pinned.
   He began to mutter to himself, "won't leave me alone, he won't leave me alone, please leave me alone,"
   As fast as he had appeared, Vic released his hold on me and retreated back into the shadows that blanketed the manor. I fell back against the wall holding my chest where Vic had assaulted me.
   I sank to the floor. I no longer attempted to convince myself that nothing lurked within the shadowy confines of Tyler Manor. Something waited...but for what? Why did it intend to harm us? Could any of us escape from it?
   I was dragged from my thoughts by a shout that sounded as if it came from my father. I leaped up and rushed into the kitchen to find my mother collapsed on the ground, pale and convulsing. I glanced up at the terrified face of my father and realized that my questions would go unanswered, but whatever lived inside this manor would have its victory soon enough.
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