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Author Topic: Luke's Folly  (Read 2171 times)

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Re: Luke's Folly
« Reply #15 on: September 27, 2012, 10:14:07 PM »
I'm glad to offer advice you're taking this well.

Can't wait to see Ch. 3 myself.

As for your talent with dialogue, it really means that you've really "gotten in tune" with your characters and writing their words is natural for you. It takes no effort to do so, so it flows through you and onto the page. I'm sorry if this sounds silly, but I really have no other words to say it at this time.

Good job.
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Re: Luke's Folly
« Reply #16 on: September 28, 2012, 01:24:53 PM »
Thankk you. When i have an idea for a story, the idea appears as a movie in my head, and i just try to convey what i see onto the pages. And it IS pretty easy for me to write dialouge.
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