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Author Topic: Shiro's Mindscape  (Read 1685 times)

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Offline ShiroTenshiRyu

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Shiro's Mindscape
« on: May 06, 2014, 05:04:13 PM »
So I figured I'd post some poetry see what you guys think. I also want to flex my RPing muscles so all of these posts will be in character. My real self will be in orange.


I'll be in teal. I'm Helios and I'm a laid back lynx who just wants to have a good time, but don't hurt my friends or I'll break you.


I'm Sorin and I'll be in red. I'm a real serious type and I do things by the book. Well I can bend the rules sometimes, but usually for my best friend Trixsie!


And I'm Kai! I'll be in magenta, but I don't talk much. I'll try my best to show up, when I'm not stuck in my novel or practicing rune writing.



All responses will be in character. Here's the first!


Mistress of Micheal, for surely that's who you are

 
For only she could be the heavenly beauty before me

 
Lips stained red with lovers passion

 
And Greek Fire eyes with filled with desire

 
Earth brown locks cascade your soft round face

 
Colored white with snow kissed sin

 
Heavenly beauty before me, for only could it be

 
That Angels walk amongst us, hidden by tragedy
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

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If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2014, 07:45:21 AM »
Hmm how odd no comments. Oh well, writer won't mind.


Anyway the writer is a big softy. Kinda like me, but his hair is fluffier. But I digress, this next poem is really close to writer. His hearts always free to roam and meet other hearts, which can always hurt a little.


One time you'll see I'm here
Two times you'll fall in love
Three times you'll cry of fear
Four times you'll believe
Five times I'll fail you honestly
Six times you'll forgive me
Seven times you'll bring joy
Eight times you'll stop tears
Nine times you'll fall asleep
Ten times I'll see you here
Every time I'll fall in love
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

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This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2014, 09:30:18 AM »
They're both very good but I like the first one better.


I look forward to seeing more

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2014, 11:49:57 AM »
I agree Tyga, but Shiro wrote the second one for a girl ;)


Oh shut up Helios. Ignore him anyway I give you guys Falling!


Falling

       Falling

                Falling....

And I'm the one left on the floor.
In shambles, shards, pieces, and parts.
All around me the sun rises and falls in synched motion.
Grab me please keep me from the black ocean.
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

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This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2014, 05:13:00 AM »
So this isn't a poem but rather a small intro to a character I'm writing. Hope you like it!


My name is Anna Rofellos. When I was seven I was tormented by a dream about a white rabbit. It was the same dream every night. A beautiful wedding, I was a flower girl or something, I blinked removing sense of vision, then suddenly there was fire. All around me I heard screams of horror and anguish. I blinked, removing my sense of vision yet again. People were laughing and smiling a wicked grin as they looked at me and pointed. I looked down at my hands I panicked. I was covered in green flames. I cried out in desperation. I wasn't sure if I was in pain or not, I was too terrified to figure it out. I closed my eyes, tried to shut it out. When I opened them I was in a field of white roses, and staring into my eyes was a white rabbit, and he'd always whisper to me, "Beware the smiling Cat."
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

Expert Hugger, King of the Forums, and God of the Sun, Dead, and Sea!

This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #5 on: May 08, 2014, 04:07:46 PM »
Character number two! This next character is Tobi. I really like the idea here of a character so caught up in denial that he ends up being reckless which you'll see in time.


"Tobi are you listening?" The rabbit asked him. Tobi only continued to stare out the window. When he was younger he'd talk to rabbit. His parents thought he  was crazy when he told them about the talking rabbit. They gave him so many drugs, Risperdal, Clozapine, and countless others, that he no longer knew if the rabbit was real himself. "I'm telling you Tobi this is the last time I'll be able to see you. The Cat has gone mad. Tobi please you have to find that shard!" Finally Tobi acknowledge the rabbit only to see it fade away.
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

Expert Hugger, King of the Forums, and God of the Sun, Dead, and Sea!

This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #6 on: May 09, 2014, 07:28:28 AM »
You found the poem!!


I thought it was lost forever :(


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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #7 on: May 09, 2014, 02:08:14 PM »
yeah turns out I put it in the wrong folder XD


Can you see the warm summer breeze?
I can, and it shows me her beauty.
It dances between her locks drawing my eyes to her
Her eyes, soft, soft brown and they draw me deeper
If ever it was escape I'd ever wanted, I don't now.
I think back now to the summer breeze, so I ask again
Can you see the summer breeze
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

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If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

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This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #8 on: May 10, 2014, 08:31:29 AM »
oh wow! Just wow! That last one was very good i like that, all are good but i like the last one the most <3

Well the second one its awesome too ^^
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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #9 on: May 27, 2014, 09:37:05 PM »
There she goes, off to graduation,
There she goes, off the wedding day
There they go, hand in hand walking away
There he goes, following a dream here to stay
And here I stay, left once more, nothing to say
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

Expert Hugger, King of the Forums, and God of the Sun, Dead, and Sea!

This isn't going to my head I swear!

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Re: Shiro's Mindscape
« Reply #10 on: June 05, 2014, 02:08:22 PM »
Hmmm kinda wanna show off my characters soooo here's one <3






Name: Gabriella Novarus

 
Gender: Female

 
Age: 18

 
Birthday: January 13

 
Sexuality: Straight

 
Special Characteristics: N/A

 
Personality: Gabriella is stubborn and fierce. Being the youngest of five, she has always had to fight for what she wants and this has led to her abrasive, sociable manner. Despite this she is well educated and often spends her time off singing and acting. Gabriella is a simple girl opting for a rural lifestyle instead one of luxury. In battle Gabriella is an indomitable wall. She prefers to let her magic accent her weapons and skills rather than let it dominate her battle style.

 
Likes: Gabriella loves snow. She enjoys sleeping outside and watching the stars, one of the few things she has in common with her older brother, Theon. She loves swimming and making new friends.

 
Dislikes: Gabriella dislikes bullying and will go out of her way to stop it. She hates being told what to do and will often do the opposite just to spite the other person.

 
Appearance

 
Height: 5’8”

 
Weight: 130

 
Hair: Long with big curls, white with a strip of teal.

 
Eyes: Hazel

 
Skin Tone: Olive

 
Appearance:  Gabriella wears a beautiful, strapless, white dress that stops about midway to her knee. The dress is laced at the bottom in teal. She wears thigh high red socks and red combat boots with silver buckles. She sometimes wears a black leather coat similar to her brother Theon’s. Strapped to her back is her sword and shield. Her shield is flat on top and angled to a mutual point on the sides. It bares her family crest, a sword surrounded in an aura like substance. Her sword is made of special substance that is white in color and will never scratch or break. The blade is about three feet long with a foot long handle. The handle is silver with veins of red and teal. The sides of the handle jut out and then curve in on themselves.


Magic: Ice
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We don't ask for the life we are given, but we can ask ourselves to live it to the fullest.

I sometimes think as many as six impossible things before breakfast ~ Alice, Through the Looking Glass

If you think I put little effort into getting dressed, just see how little I'll need to put into kicking your ass ~ Trixsie Vixen

Expert Hugger, King of the Forums, and God of the Sun, Dead, and Sea!

This isn't going to my head I swear!

 

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