Personally I draw my makes with triangular sharpness and my females with similar builds but rounded features, as roundness provides an instinctive association with softness and feminine qualities. Perhaps harden up the squarer qualities if your pic and sharpen the corners up a tad? I dunno. That's how I do it, just trying to suggest stuff. Also - his right eye and cheek. Could they perhaps go down a bit? They don't look level.
I hope this all came across as helpful and not, you know, cruel critique...*grins sheepishly*