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Asylum of Blackened Tears
« on: January 04, 2015, 01:58:06 AM »
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Chapter One-Not So Humble Beginnings


The dark asylum halls were bathed in the stench of rotting flesh. Small flickers of light cast a small glimpse of my surroundings. I was being wheeled into a day room, strapped to a moving dolly held back by a straitjacket and ties. The wretched howls of those damned to reside in Riverview Mental Hospital echoed throughout my very soul. Cries of desperation and psychosis ring my ears all the while as we approached the day room. They did the usual as I entered the day room. Untie me, take off my straitjacket, at lock me inside the decaying padded room. Nothing but me, my thoughts, and armed security guards watching my every move on security camera.
"How are you today Miss Ashlyn?"
"I'm fine," I said blankly, trying to read the previous inhabitant's writing on the wall. It was like a psychotic time capsule of all the insane and damned caged before me. The air was thick, musty. Hard to breathe with the fibers of the padding frayed up and carried around the ill-ventilated day room like the ashes of the crematorium. You may be asking, why is little Miss Ashlyn, 17 years of age in an asylum-I mean, Psychiatric hospital. They prefer that term, as if it makes the horror that occurs here any less severe. I fed the lust I beckoned for. Flesh, guts, the gore of the human anatomy, spread out in front of me. It was like a zombie's first thanksgiving. The flickering light of my family's old wood cabin's light made the blood glow a beautiful Crimson color. It was to die for. Now, however, I have to seek nourishment from whatever slop the kitchen serves. I could get more nutrition if I had licked the floor clean. Provided, I would contract a horrid disease, but nevertheless, it would be far more life sustaining.
"Miss Ashlyn?" I strained my eyes trying to read whatever it is that's written on the wall. It looked like, 'God can't help us, God can't help us, God can't help us, GOD IS DEAD, GOD CAN'T HELP U-.' The writing grew too frantic to even follow anymore. It was astonishing I could even read it, given the absolutely inadequate lighting. I wonder what became of the patient.
"Ashlyn, recognize you're being spoken to!"
"Whatever shall I do? Shall I give way to any idle threats you may send my way?"
"Idle threat?!? Miss Ashlyn, you best-" The 'Warden' was cut off by the blaring PA system.
"Code black! We have escaped patients of unknown number! They're outside the door!" I was staring at the one-way reflective glass as the announcement was stated. "Oh god, they're breaking through! God help me, God help me-!" You could faintly hear the thud of each blow the man sustained. His screams for mercy were... Satisfying. I wish I were there to have some fun. The announcement was cut short as the lights shut off, whatever light there ever was that is. The emergency generator kicked on. A red emergency light flashed slowly and rhythmically. It was a highly unlikely event that the door became unlocked in a state of emergency and power loss, but what the hell. I might as well try. I inched my way along the padded room. It would prove difficult to open the door wearing a straitjacket, but it would be the difference between life and death. Starve, or try to break free. Upon reaching the door, I lifted my leg, resting my foot against the old knob.
"Here goes..." With the best grip my toes could provide, I gave it a twist. Surely enough. The door cracked open. I couldn't even describe what I was seeing. The hall lights were scattered, flickering. Dead security guards lie around, heads smashed open, gray matter pouring from the cracks. One even had an arm removed, ripped off by brute strength. I walked the narrow and dimly lit hall. Steam pipes burst from the electric cutoff valves locked to a close. The distant screams of those being beaten and disemboweled accompanied the smell of rotting flesh. It was almost music, like Beethoven's 5th symphony. Now now, how to get this straitjacket off? Maybe a knife? Wouldn't be able to grab it. Maybe use friction to saw the straps off? That could work. The concrete columns were old and worn enough to provide enough friction.
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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2015, 09:23:59 AM »
*Reads Intently* :o ...Where's... do I turn the page?... ooh, it might be on the back.. ?!
Like a wet Shirt on a Clothesline, im hanging to dry for the next part. :P Me likey.
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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2015, 05:09:49 PM »
Thank you!!! Normally no one reads these, let alone thinks it's even slightly decent. Thanks!!!
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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2015, 05:40:56 PM »
Im gonna agree we tim we need more
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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2015, 09:11:00 PM »

The column ahead of me was worn. The concrete was rough, and there were even signs of a gunshot, due to the poorly done spot-fill. I after enough effort and determination, the concrete sawed through the leather straps. I stretched, my arms reaching towards the long-unseen sky. I felt  a warm breeze against my neck. I must be by the heating vent, because the vents often spewed moist, thick heat that could almost drown you.
"Now now... Where to?" The corridor split into a 4 way intersection. I could choose any direction, as long as I found a way out.  I decided I'd head the way I was wheeled in, the left corridor. I walked casually, no... Empowered, down the halls. I was no one's prisoner. Nobody's patient. The prey has become the predator. I walked the familiar hall, D Block, west wing of the patient's cells. There were lifeless bodies with expressions that proved quite the contrary. They were all stuck in the expression of horror and agony. Too bad I missed the party. Among the bodies, one in particular caught my eye. He had a pocketknife clipped in his pocket. A folding utility knife, nothing special, but nothing to walk away from. I picked it up from the pocket, but stopped mid-action by the sound of a faint gurgling. Upon further inspection, it was the officer. The patients must have hit-and-ran, because he was still, barely, alive. How deliciously easy. This guard would prove to be useful as a tool and food. I like it when they're alive... I want them to see who feeds upon their mortal flesh. I could hear the laughter again... It comes every time I feed... That damned laughter! It's enough to send me into a rage! ...And it does. Before I realize what I'm doing, I had already cut his throat and fished the heart out of the cut. The laughter subsided... For now anyways... My hands were bathed in blood, forearm deep. Should I feel sympathy? Should I feel remorse? Maybe, but I don't. No one showed me any sympathy as a child. They didn't feel guilt for beating me senseless, so what difference is it that I feel nothing? The meal was over, and it was time to move on. As I inched along the hallway, I could hear an patient's maniacal cackling. It wasn't that of sadness, but pleasure in having done what they desired. There was red writing along the walls as I walked. The dim light provided just enough to get a glimpse and read it. 'I killed her, I did it, kill, kill, kill! I want them all dead!Murder now, kill kill kill!!!' That's when I saw it. An old man, stooped over a corpse, unidentifiable, dipping his old fingers into the chest cavity and using the blood to paint. He payed no attention to me. He simply cackled on and kept writing. I had that nameless feeling. I could kill him too, just for the sheer pleasure of spilling more blood, but oddly enough, I couldn't. I kept walking, my legs carrying me further into the depths of the Asylum without conscious thought. The entire facility looked like it was post-apocalyptic. It was almost like a zombie apocalypse, but the zombies were alive and unpredictable. There was that warm and moist heat again.
"I've been watching you... Hehehehehe," a sickly whisper said. I turned to see a horribly disfigured man, burn wounds, cut wounds, scars everywhere. "You want to know the way out do ya...? Hehehehehehehehe...."
"Of course I do."
"How about we pair up to get out. I know the way, but I'm not capable of manipulating doors and mechanisms that well," he said holding out his arthritic hands. "What do you say, Ashlyn...?" The way he said my name was very concerning, but so was every patient in the asylum. The fact he could speak intelligible English was amazing as it is. Maybe I can kill him when it's over.
"Sure. I'll do the heavy lifting, as long as I'm free."
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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2015, 09:55:16 PM »
It's like a narration to Neverending Nightmare.


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Re: Asylum of Blackened Tears
« Reply #6 on: January 05, 2015, 07:21:55 PM »

I followed the man quite a ways. We wandered what seemed to be aimless, but the man seemed to have an indescribable sense of direction.
"Ashlyn... Why are you alone Ashlyn...?" He wheezed inner wen every few words. It didn't help my distrust of him.
"My older sister sent me off to this asylum because I was crazy. Even the jury ruled me insane."
"I see Ashlyn... Do you have any family besides your sister...?" For a long pause, I pondered. Could telling the truth be harmful to me in this situation? Could lying be beneficial? What would it matter?
"I killed my mother. My father died when I was three." He took a long, wheezing breath. I almost half expected dust to fly from his mouth as he exhaled.
"Such a shame Ashlyn.. I hope our paths cross again soon..." Soon? We're deep into the cell block, with even worse lighting than before! Before I knew it, a cloth met my mouth, muffling my screams. I grew weak, tired... It was like the world as I knew it was fading away into the black depths of nothingness. I don't remember going down and hitting the floor. It was like I was asleep on impact. Strange enough, it's darker when I awake. Wait... Darker? I tried to get up, but I've been tied to some sort of piping. I couldn't move my arms. I was like a trapped animal, witnessing its final moments before extinction.
"Ashlyn... What's wrong...?" There he was. Carrying a candle and a knife, he was smiling. "Surprised...? I don't have bad arthritis, I must have lied... Silly me..." There was a boiling in my stomach. I felt a rage that only murder could satisfy. My eyes became blurred by rage, and my breathing heavy.
"I'll kill you!" The man simply stared, wheezing.
"Unlikely... You're mine now... Ashlyn..." He brought some sort of makeshift ribbon, a strip of orange cloth. He grabbed my hair and tied the cloth into a bow. He caressed my cheek, "Now now Maddeline... You'll be fine my dear..." I was renamed... He called me Maddeline. I had to get out. My only chance was fast approaching as he left the cell to 'get some toys.' The pipe behind me was rusty. I could try the same trick as the straitjacket, but it's too risky. The makeshift ties were made of ripstop cloth from a guard's uniform. Maybe... I can rip the pipe. The pipe was rusted to corrosion, and it wiggled around easily, so that's my best bet, right? I struggled, thrashed, and wiggled until my hypotheses was proven correct. The pipe snapped off and I was able to untie myself. As my eyes adjusted and the candle provided some light, I saw I was in a room. A patient's cell. The walls were adorned with the name 'Maddeline' all over it.other than that, it was the average cell. Sink, bathroom, bed. I heard his heavy, almost erratic footsteps approaching. Hang on, bed! I can hide until he leaves! Like a swift fox, I crawled under the bed. He walked in with a knife and a small stuffed doll.
"M-Maddie...?" He dropped the toy faster than a bad habit. He fell to his knees by the ties, holding them like a wounded animal he would care for. "Oh Maddie," He wheezed in between sobs. I slowly untied the bow and snuck up on him. There's the feeling, she screaming, the LAUGHTER. With all my force, I wrapped the cloth around his neck and pulled. He fought as hard as he could. I made one flaw... He still had the knife in his hand. The lunged it behind himself in attempt to stab me, and he did. Once in the middle of my thigh, left to the bone. Lucky he missed the artery and just hit flesh. This made me more driven. I pulled harder until I heard his life slip out of one last wheeze. Numbed by rage, I hardly noticed the blood coming from my leg. Crap... What do I do? I tore some cloth from my pant leg to use as a bandage. I looked outward from the exit. I have no clue where I am... This whole wing is a mystery to me. Well, at least with my newly acquired candle as a light source, I have better visibility.
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