asking for review

[saber-gray]

hi, im new here, i dont know if this is the right place to do it or the right time for, i have a webcomic/novel, in the past two years i had trouble staying with one artist and in the end i decided to go on writing it and finish this, i did made progress in writing skills up to now, so im asking for a review and comment about the story, like is the story good and how is the character doing, like that sort.


here is the webcomic: www.ninjawolfsaizo.com
for now my plan is to post 2-3 comic page in every chapter put, still i dont have one at this moment 

[Dmscootr]

Wow that's really good Its a shame you couldn't stick with that artist I wish I could draw ;/

[saber-gray]

Wow that's really good Its a shame you couldn't stick with that artist I wish I could draw ;/

thank you so much (Dmscootr) and that means a lot to me, what also do you like about the story, i dont want to force you to anything but since you have seen it, what do you think, you commit could make my story more better in future.

[Dmscootr]

The artwork was a big plus and the story was pretty nice I liked the details the name of the ninjas was a little bland just demon ninjas it doesn't matter to much because that is just a small thing also unlike mine I felt like the dialog flowed really well

[saber-gray]

The artwork was a big plus and the story was pretty nice I liked the details the name of the ninjas was a little bland just demon ninjas it doesn't matter to much because that is just a small thing also unlike mine I felt like the dialog flowed really well

alright, its great that the art work is plus and story has a direct impact for the reader, what about the novel, do it loses interest with out the comic page or still it intensest to read and make you want to see what will happen or how it will end, also im planing to throw comic pages in every chapter i put, 2-3 pages to be exact like showing a preview of the chapter but i still dont have a perfect artist, i have one and lets say he dose charge a lot but hes really good.

[Dmscootr]

I don't think you will lose interest without the comic page

[saber-gray]

good to hear this, such stress was lefted knowing i can go on putting more chapter and worry later for the pages to come .


 cheers

[Rudy Allen]

Biggest problem is grammar. A story needs correct grammar, and I recommend Google Docs (which is free! All you need is an account on there and boom! Free easier Microsoft Word!) or if you want, Grammarly. You do need to pay for the premium but the free version works just swell.


Next, if you lack an artist, I'm sure if you post an ad on here in the correct forum, I'm sure many people would love to draw it. I hope you continue this, it's not so bad.




 

[saber-gray]

Biggest problem is grammar. A story needs correct grammar, and I recommend Google Docs (which is free! All you need is an account on there and boom! Free easier Microsoft Word!) or if you want, Grammarly. You do need to pay for the premium but the free version works just swell.


Next, if you lack an artist, I'm sure if you post an ad on here in the correct forum, I'm sure many people would love to draw it. I hope you continue this, it's not so bad.





 

thank you for the comment, for the grammar problem i do have a lot and also english isnt my first language, im doing my best with google translater and i did ask for editor,  no one show, but i pulled it through and fixed it fast, i try to fix and revise before the second week.

and for artist, i tryed to ask for one, god knows how many ad i put but all they came werent as what my comic want, also i thank you again for liking the story, can i ask what you expect and hope for the story to be, it really be helpful that i know my readers what they like or not.

thanks and cheers.

[saber-gray]

the chapters are fixed and ready to be read, hope you guys enjoy reading it and tell me your reviews and comment.


thanks and cheers

[Rainbowbulldog]

It's amazing  the story is really interesting and I can't wait for more of it