Who did this? No, I think you mean what. (My first RP with a plot line)

[dvdog]

This was going to be a story but I decided it might be fun to turn it into a role play. So how does an apocalypse like fallout with bits of halo and dead space and some time paradoxes sound? I do have experience with writing stories but this is my first attempt at making a story as a RP. I want you to give me feedback on how I write it so i can make it better but as a precaution I would like to make more role plays so even if you just take a peek at it please write a tip or something.


Now I have that out of the way when I get a few people who want to help me as well as be part of this write the details for your character and when I get 5 to 6 people who want to try it then I will start the RP in till then see ya.


(Ps I have mock exams tomorrow and Friday then all of next week so I have to revise and sorry if I come off as serious I don't mean to I just want to make a great first impression).

[Calvin Hobbs]

Why not. Can I join?

[dvdog]

Yea you can if you want

[Yachiru the unforgiven]

Name: Laurence Bezkerski

Species: anthro dragon

Gender: male

Personality: he is a nice person but tends to get angry easily and puts it into working or if he's defending someone into that whether it be a physical altercation or a verbal one. He prefers people to get along as best as possible so he might get a little pushy about it. Although when he gets pissed enough he tends to either walk away or destroy things with his energy unintentionally. He tends to apologize alot so people see him as a pacifist when in reality he is more of a passive aggressive person. When he makes friends he tends to help with anything he can but isn't afraid of being turned down.

Equipment: usually carrying around a pistol for self defense but even then he doesn't use it since he doesn't like to kill others unless he absolutely has to. He also has a sniper rifle at home and usually hunts animals for food. He also has a katana which he can infuse his energy into and make it about 5x stronger than usual.

Features(scars and what not): he is 5'11", 180lbs, and has various scars on his body from his past. He also has invisible tattoos of covenant symbols as he was recruited into their army and eventually rescued by the USNC when they raided the ship he was on. He also still has his tags from his days in their army and wishes he could see his comrades again someday.

Author's note: if it seems long winded I'm sorry as I tend to get in writing mode and don't want to stop for anything. Again sorry.