my new poems...ENJOY!

[Dr. Strange]

xD That's cool Max. I suck now.

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

"NO...you dont, yours are great !...heres some more though..unfortunately

I love this ype of weather
stingy and grey, perfect for my mood
the wind rolls around angrily
the sky sheds tears
A loved one is lost
An innocent is DEad
A pet is buried
And a secret is kept

A lie is snuffed out
And there will be blood to be shed
The world ignores the crying child
Ahe wails and screams, and shouts
But she is pushed away

Everyday a person screams out for HELP!
it radiates from their body
spilling out of their lips-Words Unspoken-
and exploding out of their chest
The lucky ones get help, but the others....

Listen to people, sometimes their screaming
Scraming out for help just like you
listen and you might just get a surprise
Listen...AND HELP!

Dont abandon hope- there`s always a light, even in the darkests of times

*pouts..next one*
 
Im bleeding inside, nobody notices
im screaming out for help, nobody cares
im dying inside, i dont realise...
i loved you with all my heart
and you chose to kick it back
like your doing to others right now
     Time means nothing anymore
because you`ve stopped my
   clogs from working..you took the key
And so i wait.....
                                       For somebody...
To....
               SAVE ME!

[[D.E.M] zetsumei]

nice stuff ^^ a lot of emotion in there

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

thanks and sorry

with every painful step you take
My heart brakes in two
No matter how much i listen to you
our hearts will remain as one

No matter how much you annoyed and ignored me
The only thing that i shall see
is the way in which you loved and cared for me
Through those dark and stormy time

Although you will soon fade away
your soul shall be forever free
And the memories will always stay
With always think, and say

"i will always love you"
                     "Forever and ever"
"You will always stay true"
             "I will MISS YOU...."


                            Summer?
The sun blazes down
Through the healthy green trees
The wind plays happily through the heated day
and children play to the music of the bay.
                  "summers here,summers here"
Children chat and play,free at last
teenagers stay up late, raving and chilling
And adults lounge around and chat
Nothing can stop them cos...
        "SUMMER TIMES HERE"
Drunken days, and embarrasing parents
forgotten nights and challenging days
lay ahead for the next few weeks
relaxing, is one of the tops
       "PLAY TIME IS HERE"
But soon summer draws to a close
and winter wraps us up tight
cool drinks and swims are
replaced by cocoa and blankets
     "summer times going..."
But the kids are counting down
cos soon it`ll be SUMMER
and there`s more havoc to spread
               cos
"SUMMERS SOON TO COME...!"

one nice one YAYi

     Im missing you...!
Im missing you with every breath i take
and every heartbeat i make
Im missing you, i wish to be near you, with you, HELPING you...
But theese are all fantasies and dreams
cos your were i cant reach you
your where ther`s warmth and sunshine
and happiness all around

But im counting down the days
waiting for the day when i`ll be reuninted with you
And this time nothing on earth or heaven will be able to tear us apart
the pain is coming again and this time
its getting harder...and harder..to...BREATHE..

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

..SOZ!....

I close my eyes and suck in my last breath
saying farewell to all thoose i knew and loved, treasured
and now i wait for you to come for me, so i can jump and runa with you once more
and race into that light and warmth

Not long now....
                                       i love you all but....
Goodbye....

I lie here alone and waiting
The weather grey and gloomy
My heart aches with longing
and the wind roars wildly about
I lay still and quiet
I look up, up
the skys weeping, and the winds howling
I lay back and stare up into the sky
A tree over hangs me, sheilding me from the outside world

The world seems to be in turmoil
Everyday the world tries to attract our attention
but we just push it away
THe wind rolls in pain and anger, it shares it sadness within us and around us
both of them make me feel better
They understand how i feel
the tears well up and burst
Im crying just like a river
But nobody cares, nobody listens,nobody figures
that there not the only one whoose screaming out for
                              HELP

[flames]

Nice
You have a unique style of writing.

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

style..huh??? i guess there oki, i wonder, srry but did they make you feel for it or not..sorry

[flames]

(No need to apologise for anything) The amount of emotion the reader can feel from reading your poems tends to vary frompoem to poem, but each one always makes the reader feel something .

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

sorry but any sadness or jsut twinges...

[flames]

sorry but any sadness or jsut twinges...

I'd say that it is a lot more then just twinges of sadness.

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

oh...were they that bad...i tried to make people feel an inkling of how i felt somedays i guess....maybe

[flames]

I said: "A lot more than just twinges of sadness", meaning that the intensity of the emotions is quite high. (Sorry if I was a bit unclear)

[XXxMaximuMXXx]

no no that was me being unclear...in the head LOL



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