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When World's Collide
« on: April 22, 2009, 12:42:14 AM »
Well this is a story I started on Deviant Art (although crappily) and I decided to continue it on both here and there, if you want a link, i'll link you to my profile, you can find all the stories, for I am too lazy to link 5 different things http://gabag1337.deviantart.com/

So anyways the story: this is going along if you READ the first five chapters on Deviant Art. but for you lazy people (can't blame you personally) Here;s a synopsis. The people of Mobius are in danger of Doc. Robotnik's growing army (that actually kills people!). The main character is my fursona Carmine. He gets taken and roboticized, and he escapes, and now essentially fights to preserve SOME if not all the Mobians. But there;s a twist, it just isn't Robotnik genociding everything. It's also the White Scars Space Marines, who decided to join the party, and well, kill things and drive really fast.
This Chapter 5 that created Dramatic Backdrop!
As the helicopters started flooding in the breach of the hull, the only thing I could do was to place the distress beacon, and hope that someone picked it up. The area was in a mass panic, people scrambling for cover as hunter choppers gunned them down or fired missiles. Suddenly, the firing of the gatling guns stops.
“They must have run out of ammunition” I thought. The helicopters started flying away, probably for a re-arm and re-fit. As I climb the rafters I see some older craft headed our way. “Here come the Rangers”. As the VTOL’s hovered over the breach in the Hall’s roof, soldiers rappelled down, unloading ammo, and fortifications in preparation for some upcoming attack. I looked up in the sky, and I saw what they were preparing for. Drop pods, around a small army of them, descending towards the earth, and lighting up the night sky. As they drew near I could hear them scream down to the earth, ready to disengage their armed cargo. The ground shook with amazing force, even for drop pods, I took a look outside and saw a giant container, slowly open up, and release an enormous mech. Miniguns and autocannons blazing, it began to fire on our position, tearing out wall supports, and tearing pillars apart. To the east, I heard the methodical march of Shock Troopers. Slowly, and surely they advanced on the Hall’s position. I didn’t look long, for a uranium round rocketed towards my head, and just barely I was able to avoid it.

This is the Battle of 10,000 Sorrows.

So anyways, When World's Collide: Chapter 6
                                                                Sorrow Emerges/ Hope Dies/ Target Markers
After dodging the round, my only thought was to find a rocket launcher. Taking one from the supply containers from the Rangers, I stood in the Rafters waiting for hell. White Scars marines flooded towards the doors with suprising speed for their bulk, firing their boltguns and killing Rangers. The Rangers fired back with assault rifles and minigun turrets. It did little against the superior armor of the Scars, and quickly, a defense turned into a slaughter and the Rangers were routed. Jumping down from the rafters i fired a rocket into the throbbing mass of Scars taking down a few, and quickly reaching for my chainsword to cut another two down.  Taking a bolt to the shoulder, I quickly turn and see a captain charge at me, chainsword already revved up. "TAKE DOWN THE BLUE XENOS WE MUST CLEANSE THIS PLANET!" He shouted through his suit vox. Dodging the blade, I darted right sawing off his sword arm, he didn't yell in pain. The alabaster warrior instead fired his boltgun at me taking off my right arm. Suddenly a green bolt hits the marine and I turned my head to see the one who had captured me. Deadeye. Standing triumphant over his newest kill, he didn't give me much more then a second glance. As I charged him he fires his weapon incinerating my leg. As I struggled to stand, he turned towards me, but then a young Mobian girl, a mutant ran in front of me arms wide. Realizeing Deadeye would shoot anyways I shove the girl out of the way and take the charged bolt to my side. Suddenly everything is going black...... vision fading.... and suddenly I couldn't hear anything.... then total silence.

Suddenly a voice "Come on doctor, save him.... please!" a young voice pleaded. As I opened my eye, I looked upon the same girl as before. She had a tear in her eye, as she looked away from me. Reaching my still functional arm up to her face, I brushed away the tears, surprising her that I was still alive. "YOUR ALIVE? It's a miracle!" she exclaimed. I looked down at myself, and there was a large gaping hole in my chest, and my left leg and arm were missing. As I started tearing up, vision failed me again, and so did my hearing. The only thing i Heard was "Hold on, He's going into Cardiac Arrest!"

                                                         This, is how I die.......



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Re: When World's Collide
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2009, 02:43:07 AM »
 :'(
Dang it! You knew I'd get upset, didn't you?
heh.
Good job though. :)
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Re: When World's Collide
« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2009, 02:44:09 AM »
I did???

lol thanks!

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Re: When World's Collide
« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2009, 02:50:32 AM »
I'm very sensitive to character deaths, but not exactly real deaths. I'm odd that way. 'Tis why when reading the last Harry Potter book, I ended up crying a bunch of times.

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Re: When World's Collide
« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2009, 02:54:27 AM »
O I wouldn't actually kill my fursona, it's just the death of his soul, for his 'humanity' was killed by the machine that makes up his body


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Re: When World's Collide
« Reply #5 on: April 23, 2009, 03:08:56 AM »
Ah, I gotcha.
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