The Cancer Secret

[PhantomStone]

i didn't say no experimentation, i never said anything like that! i said "don't do it with out their consent" ok come on guys, how would you feel if a dude you thought was dead, was living in your basement, got up in the middle of the night, kidnapped you and ran tests on you with your consent. THAT is what i was saying. NOT "no experimentation". i hate it when people put words in my mouth.

[Derricklesters2009]

What we're trying to say is:

The kind of "Wierd" expirements are things that no one would consent to. They are far too frightening. The people would NEVER consent to such actions. It is the fact that Henry stepped out of his moral boundary to do the horrible things that he did that caused him to find the cure for cancer. He went to the extreme to find what he was looking for when science IRL is bound by Moral and legal obligation. Do you see now?

[PhantomStone]

i never was confused about what i saw. listen, do what you want with your story. i won't like it and will not read it if you have the doctor be immoral with the experimentations. I'm just saying and i was adding my input earlier in. I'm sick of people getting on my back about my opinions. I'm out of this thread.

[Dr. Strange]

~waves~ see ya.

What else are you doing in the story, Derrick?

[Chrono Blackwyng]

Ah, conspiracies and twisted experiments never cease to amaze and interest me....amazing story Derrick

[Derricklesters2009]

Cool thing is that my film productions group might [and that is a BIG *might*] make this into a short film.

I wasn't sure whatelse to do with the story until today.

After he finds the cure, he goes and he finds a friend. An old friend, possibly a professor that used to teach him or something. This person is of high intelligence; thus, he doesn't flip out when he sees Henry for the first time. The professor, as he will be called for the time being, will remain composed. Henry has the professor look at the chemical composition of the liquid.  The professor does some calculations in his head and basically agrees with him. The professor will be quirky, fun, intelligent and very likable. This will make an excellent sidekick to Henry for comedic effect. He will stick by Henry through most of the film. Henry goes to his parents to try and convince them to give him money and help. The CIA breaks into the house. Three agents hold the family of three up hostage. One who appears to be the leader demands the location of the cure. Henry explains to them, "This chemical that I have created, despite how seemingly irrational the actions of concoction may seem, has indeed proven to cure cancer!" The lead agent will reply, "I know."

Henry believes that the CIA is on his side but remains weary and anyone else kowing where it is. Not even the professor will know of it's location. The CIA agents will kidnap the professor and his parents and state, "If you do not hand over the cure for destruction, we will kill your parents and your freind, but we won't stop there. After them, we will find you and we will kill you. You have until [X time or day or something] to deliver it to us."

And now he tries to find more of his friends that he once knew, where he will break into the CIA, save his parents, save the professor, and get the word out to the POTUS that the cure for cancer has finally been found.

[I figured that if we brought the conflict inward and closer to home, via putting his family members in danger, it would cause a larger conflict and more feeling would be forced out of Henry. What do you guys think?]

[Dr. Strange]

Very good. A master at such a young age, it's a rare site in this world.

[Chrono Blackwyng]

all I can say is that I agree, but I wonder if its a short or moderate length film....