Everything fades to Nothing

[.: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.]

Hey, this is a poem I decided to write on a whim, tell me if it's good or not kay?

I am everything.

I am the highest mountain, standing tall to see out into the world
I am the deepest trench in the ocean, catching the clutter of the sea in my maw
I am every moment that takes your breath away, I am the adrenaline which brings your breath back to you
I am every breathtaking view and every wasteland

I hold you and all you know, I have seen the passage of every great thinker, every dictator,
every theorist, every sinner, every holy man, every terrorist, every great leader, every
criminal, every killer, every rapist, every police officer, every singer, every rock legend,
every rapper, every business tyrant and every homeless person seen on the street

I am every love letter, I am every abusive e-mail
I am every breeze blowing through the grass, I am every flame that dessicates forests
I am every diamond, every precious stone, I am every piece of trash on the street
I am every racist comment and every sympathetic touch

I hold you and all you know, I have seen the passage of every great thinker, every dictator,
every theorist, every sinner, every holy man, every terrorist, every great leader, every
criminal, every killer, every rapist, every police officer, every singer, every rock legend,
every rapper, every buisness tyrant and every homeless person seen on the street

I hold all the keys, I am every thought that crawls across your mind
I am the endless river of time, flowing inexorably across the wastes of the universe
I am every hot second of passion, I am everydrunken mistake
I am every Apology and Every plot for revenge

I hold you and all you know, I have seen the passage of every great thinker, every dictator,
every theorist, every sinner, every holy man, every terrorist, every great leader, every
criminal, every killer, every rapist, every police officer, every singer, every rock legend,
every rapper, every business tyrant and every homeless person seen on the street

I am every tear that is shed for the lost, I am every laugh that echoes for the living
I am every flower rested on a gravestone, I am every new sapling shooting out of the ground
I am every new bird chirping to the sunrise, I am every romantic couple, in each others arms as they watch the sunset
I am every great hero and every evil villain

I hold you and all you know, I have seen the passage of every great thinker, every dictator,
every theorist, every sinner, every holy man, every terrorist, every great leader, every
criminal, every killer, every rapist, every police officer, every singer, every rock legend,
every rapper, every buisness tyrant and every homeless person seen on the street

I am nothing.

[Kida Howlette]

this is an excellent poem snowy  good job

[.: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.]

Thank you for the compliment ^^

[Kida Howlette]

have you written more?

[.: ♥ Kiniia ♥ :.]

Not yet, but I am working on something

[Kida Howlette]

i'll make sure to check often 

[Xleena]

Well done Xion, such a deep poem, i love it

[Dr. Strange]

wow/.... that's deep Xion. I love the rhythm.