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« on: January 10, 2010, 10:33:19 PM »
With every argument and every fight
I do my best to try not to end us tonight.
With every curse we spit and every lie we spew
the more anger builds, the more i want to be through.
All I've ever done was be there for you,
going after no one else, only you to pursue.
How much more can I do to show you whats in my heart?
Dammit, I've been there for you from the start.
How much more can I do to show you I'm different from the rest.
For you I only want whats best, nothing less.
Leaving my heart out on my sleeve
being who I am, not who I deceive.
When you look at me, its like looking through a mirror
cause all I am hiding is all you can see, I can't be any clearer.
Drop your guard, let me in, be all that you can be.
Show me who you truly are and who you aren't, let me see.
I'll love you no matter what, now show me what you really feel.
Because I love the man thats behind that cover, the one thats real.
I'd take the beatings, the cuts, the bruises,
whatever proves my feelings, whatever amuses.
Now take a stand, be my man.
Treat me like you know you should, that you know you can.
Otherwise you'll lose me soon because I can't wait forever,
no matter all that I have endeavored.
Because I can't stand and wait for you to take your place
so choose wisely, because I can't forever be on this chase.


I was free-style rapping this while I was angry.
I decided to write most of it down. xD
It conveys my emotions at the time pretty well, and I had to erase some Curse words before posting it here.
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« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2010, 02:16:21 PM »
pretty cool, worked well, the rhythm sometimes seemed to stumble but then freestyle rap is a purely oral medium so it's probably just how I'm reading it.

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« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2010, 03:48:30 PM »
pretty cool, worked well, the rhythm sometimes seemed to stumble but then freestyle rap is a purely oral medium so it's probably just how I'm reading it.

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