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Re: Everflame
« Reply #255 on: March 05, 2010, 03:16:28 AM »
Asia's arms came together across his head to block. The foot slammed down onto the guard and Asia grabbed Korius' calf pulling it back, pulling the wolf to the rabbit as he kicked out his powerful leg.
"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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Re: Everflame
« Reply #256 on: March 05, 2010, 12:30:02 PM »
The assembled marines turned to face the newcomers with a cacoughanpy of clanks and hisses, power armour gave some of the best protection in a firefight, but made day to day life in it a living headache....  Kate pushed aside two marines forecefully and stepped, giving a cheeky smile, brushed her fringe over to one side and addresed the captain of the soldiers...

"we're with the captain... and if ya dont mind we marines dont like having guns pointed at us; hun..."
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #257 on: March 05, 2010, 04:27:23 PM »
Korius quickly pushed off the floor with his hands and caught Asia's leg. He then brought his other leg over and hooked it around Asia's neck. With a twist of his body, Korius forced Asia to the floor.

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Re: Everflame
« Reply #258 on: March 07, 2010, 03:11:30 AM »
When Tabby motioned Howl over, he walked up to her and spoke in a low voice; not to speak too loud in the middle of the sparring match. "Yes, Tabby?"
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #259 on: March 07, 2010, 03:44:42 AM »
On the Admiration, the officer nodded slightly to Kate, before smiling a diplomatic smile.
"You may not like it, but you don't have a choice. There is a dangerous criminal on this planet, and finding a bunch of armed individuals on a modified and unregistered ship is very suspect. So stay away from your guns and take off your armour." He looked over to his men. "Go search them." The boarding party marched down the shuddering metal stairway down to the bay floor, weapons always ready.






Asia fell to the floor with an 'oof', struggling to get out from Korius' legs.

Once Tabby saw Asia get taken down, she leapt up into the air and whooped her lungs out. Then, she grabbed Howl and pulled him down to sit next to her.
"Don't just stand there like a log, mate. Come on... now, I wanna ask you. What you think of them?" she said, gesturing over to the two sparring furries.
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #260 on: March 07, 2010, 11:01:16 AM »
Kate looked to the assembled marines either side of her and shrugged, power armour hissing as she did so...

"fine... do as he says..."

With much grumbling the marines dropped their carbines to the floor with clangs, and kicked them away to a far corner of the bay; after that they proceeded to take off the power armour which, with the newer versions of the suits, was a rather quick procedure....
Once everyone was de-suited and standing in a jostling line they watched the soldiers approach...
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #261 on: March 07, 2010, 12:26:03 PM »
Korius coughed a bit as they both hit the ground, though probably not as hard Asia did, but that rabbit's leg was fairly thick, and was difficult landing on it. Getting his gripped foot released after the impact, he hooked that leg around Asia's neck as well, not letting go.

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Re: Everflame
« Reply #262 on: March 08, 2010, 09:54:16 PM »
Howl looked to Tabby with a raised eyebrow. "Asia and Korius? Well, I haven't got a lot of time to make a good judgement on them. When it comes to fighting, Asia is certainly good, but Korius has been trained far more in martial arts. They've both got very well developed marksmanship, but that's usually common in their types of combat." He sighed and looked to the sparring match. "Other then that, I don't them well enough to pass judgement on their personalities. Sure, Korius may be blunt at times, but he's probably nice once you get to know him, and Asia is a well-rounded guy from what I know." Smiling, Howl glanced back at Tabby. "Your friend Korius is one of a kind, I'm sure of that."
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #263 on: March 09, 2010, 06:42:42 AM »
The GA soldiers on the Admiration marched down the rattling stairs to the cargo bay floor. Each soldier was padded down, and all personal items were thrown into a big pile at the officer's feet. The soldier frisking Kate made sure to take his time putting his hands all over her.





On Vee, Asia slapped the ground,
"OK, ok I give up. Howl, you take him on," he said. Tabby clapped and whooped.
"Yep, one of a kind," she replied to Howl, before pulling him up and shoving him towards Korius.
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« Reply #264 on: March 09, 2010, 06:58:25 AM »
Korius chuckled at Asia. "You got some great feet work there, Asia. I thought I'd be able to match it, but apparently, I still needed my arms." Korius stretched out a bit and patted himself down to loosen up his muscles again. He watched as Howl approached him and smiled a bit. "I'm glad the three of us can get together and talk strategies. After this, you're taking on Asia, Howl. Try not to hurt yourself, ok?"

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Re: Everflame
« Reply #265 on: March 09, 2010, 03:26:09 PM »
The marines went through the routine search with only minor anoyance, Kate swept her glossy hair out of her eyes and smirked as the soldier searched over very thoroughly... she laughed softly and muttered quietly too him, only loud enough for him to hear...
"keep feeling soldier, its the closest you ever gonna get..."
Laughing internally she chewed the mint gum that Colonel Crow usually finished off, she could see why he liked the mint...
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #266 on: March 14, 2010, 01:16:11 AM »
Stumbling towards Korius, Howl smiled. "Alright Korius, let's have a go at it then, though I shouldn't feel so ready to fight against a martial arts specialist." Raising his fists and getting into fighting position, Howl was ready.
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« Reply #267 on: March 14, 2010, 02:28:26 AM »
Korius changed his stance as well, similar to that of a boxer. He kept his fists up near his face and quickstepped in quickly, throwing quick jabs at Howl, pulling back as fast as he throws each punch, weaving left and right, alternating between high and low punches.

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« Reply #268 on: March 14, 2010, 01:02:43 PM »
On the Admiration, one of the soldiers turned to the officer.
"They're clean, sir," he said. The meerkat captain of the Admiration smiled.
"Very well," replied the officer. "Kera and Barry, you stay here and guard this place. The rest of you continue the search."
"Yes sir." Two of the soldiers stood back, guns ready just in case, while the others marched up the metal stairway to the catwalk and headed over to the door at the other side to the next door. They walked through, finding the crew quarters. Max the pilot stood in the corridor, leaning against the wall.
"Well hello there, boys. How may I help you," he said with a warm smile. Readouts flickered over the inside of the helmets.
"He's innocent," said one of the soldiers.
"Well ofcourse I am," said Max, as he imperceptibly relaxed. The soldiers pushed past him opening doors to find cluttered bedrooms. They invaded each room, kicking walls, upturning beds. One of these bedrooms was full of guns and ammo, draped over the walls and steel floor. A soldier turned to Max.
"Pilot, explain this," he said, gesturing to the room. Max knew who's room it was, and sighed.
"That would be Alain's. The poor boy loved his guns," he replied.
"Where is Alain?" the soldier asked.
"Back on the planet. He's dead," said Max, keeping his pleasant smile on, but it wasn't so genuine anymore. The soldiers looked at eachother. One of them stood forward.
"We're sorry for your loss, but we might have to take the guns," he said.
"Whatever you say," Max said with a salute.

A door opened further down the corridor, and Tina walked out.
"Hey Max, what's up?" she asked.
"Well, them soldiers are here and are just checking the rooms for a fugitive." Tina stretched.
"Yeah but we don't have a fugitive," she said.
"Well there's no harm in a little check," he replied. Tina sighed.
"Alright well, let me just go clean my room." A soldier stepped out into the corridor.
"Sorry but you can't do that. We'll check your room as is." They trudged out of Alain's bedroom and forced Tina to press to the wall to let them pass. They opened her door and waded into a sea of her clothes. The gunnery station had been removed and hidden in the engine room. The soldiers kicked the walls and the bed. They pulled the bed away and kicked the walls behind that, finding a hollow section. Tina looked to Max; anxiety bubbling under her skin. They pulled away the wall panel and found her Lynx boyfriend. Their helmets flashed red. He looked up at them and whispered a sigh as they raised their guns. Tina yelped in fear and tried to run to pull them away. Max grabbed her, held her back as she hissed and thrashed. One of the soldiers pulled him out and frogmarched him out of the room. "Daray Mabaton, by the power of the Galactic Authorities, you are under arrest for treason and mass murder. Don't make a fuss or a lot more people will die because of you." The lynx walked with his head low. Max pushed Tina against the wall as the soldiers marched past. His large body holding her down as she scratched and bit and screamed.

They walked out into the cargo bay. The Meerkat's face drained, his fist clenched. The officers hands did the same, but his face was lighting up and a smile crept up with the realisation of what his soldiers had found.








Over in hyperspace, aboard Vee, Asia walked over to the edge of the room, next to Tabby.
"How you feeling?" he asked.
"How am I feelin'? I'm feelin' awesome, man. Wouldn't you?" she smiled.
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Re: Everflame
« Reply #269 on: March 14, 2010, 02:10:04 PM »
Kate stood at ease with the rest of the marines, watching the two guards that had been left, warily, but with little interest...
"So..... whos up for a game of Colonial Diamonds?"
A couple of marines grunted in agreement as Kate pulled out a pack of Colonial Diamond cards from the heap of personal items that had been taken off them in the search.. both Guards raised weapons as she did so...

"Marine, step back from those items!"...

Kate stopped, paw hovering over a dog eared pack of cards amongst the pile of cigarette packets, wallets and handguns...
"Surely.... just a game of cards.... no harm in that?"

The first soldier hesitated, and then shrugged, nodding... "Sure.... but i got my eye on you...."

Kate Laughed softly as she picked up the pack of cards... "Sure ya do.... ever'ones got eyes on me...."




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"Okay... i raise to thirty credits.."
The marine, a dark tan furred fox, threw down the money and looked up at the group, smiling widely... all the players looked down to their cards and back up at the fox...

"Im out.."  "Same.... " "Make that three..."

Easily half the assembled marines threw down their cards and proceeded to watch how the game would turn out.... Kate smirked, chewing on her gum...
"Well then... Kitt, your call..."
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