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My Writing Tutorial
« on: March 11, 2010, 08:17:47 PM »
Writers!  Hi!  ^_^

Writing is probably one of my favorite arts in the world.  I am a song writer and sometimes I noodle up a poem and even s short story sometimes.  The main strain on writers is the dreaded writers block.  One technique that rarely fails to over come the writers block is:

Free Writing: Free writing...  Is where the writer suffering the dreaded writers block will start writing anything that pops into his/her mind.  You can jumble words, ideas, themes, and even settings.  You can also focus on something...  Example...  A memorable moment in your life you'd like to commemorate through story or poem.  Another variation you can even write a page of "I don't know what I'm doing!"  Once you get your brain warmed up you can take it to the next level and begin forming ideas, characters, plot, all the good things that make writing awesome.

Spelling and Grammar: There is nothing worse than reviewing a piece and it is a spelling and grammar nightmare.  If you have spell check or a dictionary handy...  Spelling is an easy fix.  Grammar; however, that's a whole different beast.

< . , ; : ' > Punctuation is a biggy when it comes to grammar.  Also capitalization, correct placement of verbs, nouns, adverbs, adjectives, conjunctions, etc...  If you don't know 100% correct grammar don't fret about it.  If you have the jist of it you can get by fine.  The only thing you really need to know is how to properly use commas and where to place words.  90% of grammar problems can be associated with commas.  Specifically, comma splices are the most common.  Here are the most common grammar mistakes:

Comma splicing, sentence fragments, and run on sentences, fused sentences.

Comma Splice: The use of a comma to separate two different ideas (commas are used to interrupt the flow of a sentence, short pauses and to separate words in a list).

Ex: Jenny went to the bowling alley, she bought a soda before she began bowling.
Corrected: Jenny went to the bowling alley.  She bought a soda before she began bowling.

Fused Sentences: Two complete sentences put together without the use of a period.
Ex: Jenny almost bowled a perfect game she was very disappointed, but still have fun.
Corrected: Jenny almost bowled a perfect game.  She was very disappointed, but still had fun.

Sentence Fragments: Sentences that isn't complete in the sense that it lacks a subject verb.

Ok...  I'm done with the boring stuff.  If you can understand most of the above, you're in the clear.  There are many comma rules, but if you read enough you can pickup on how different authors use commas.  You only need to be perfect if you're being graded.  Unless it's a complete nightmare...  You have nothing to worry about.

Back to story writing....

Genre: What style of writing do find you like the most?  Fiction, non-fiction, realistic fiction, (sub-genres) horror, comedy, romance, etc...  If you can settle on a genre but you're still stuck this is an optimal stage for free writing.  Lets say for an example you want to write a dark poem (off the top of my head), ...In the lonesome writhing haunt, the Autumn breeze cried in lamentation.  Her whisper was as cold as the first mornings dew...

Now that can be anything.  That was more or less noodled together with no meaning or purpose except to provide an example.  If any of you want to take that sentence, change it up and run with it; by all means be my guest.

Next up...

Plot, Theme, Setting, and Characters: If you can get to any of these points without any problems; you have the foundation of your story pretty much set in stone.  However, that doesn't mean you won't get stuck.  In the writing stage remember...  You can manipulate ANYTHING!  It's your story.  Have at it.  If you have a colorful cast of characters but no setting or plot, think of a real place you have either visited, or would like to visit and put your own twist on it.  If you're righting poetry theme, genre, and setting will be your focal points.  Rhyme scheme is good for some poetry, so give that a whack.  But remember...  Not all poems have to rhyme.  You have the potential to write anything, you just need to grab hold of all the right elements.  Which brings me to my next point...

Literary Elements! Foreshadowing, personification, conflict...  I can make a list but this thread is already massive...  Literary elements are one of the most important things in writing.  if you don't use these literary devices even a little bit...  You're story will get a stale.  If you know how to use them go for it.  if you don't, look them up and practice using them in writing.  Trust me, you will become a stronger writer overtime.

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All of the above...  Techniques, tips, and rules...  Get to know them well if you're prone to getting stuck.  Grammar is the structure of a piece of writing.  if you use all  improper grammar...  You can write a beautiful story, but it will look bad and ti will confuse the reader.  Free writing.  Possibly one of the best techniques to over come writers block.  Literary elements will help you're righting regarding interest.  You can integrate suspense, or unlock seemingly endless aspects of imagination.  To make all aspects of the story come together you need to have direct connections with the genre, plot, theme, and characters.  It will make transitions easier and make things less awkward for the reader.

Which brings me to my last point.  

Who is your audience? Who are you writing to?  Do you have a target audience?  If you do great.  Appeal to them and do it well.  If you don't have a specific target audience that's fine.  You just need to refine your writing so nothing will be seen as awkward depending on what you're going for.

That's all I have...  Happy writing!!  :3

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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2010, 04:38:25 PM »
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seriously, this place is a ghost town of anyone willing to talk about this kind of stuff. Please, be the kind of person who will read the stuff written here and comment about it, even if you just comment on one story a week. I was one of the few people (pretty much the only person) actually commenting on anything. Writers NEED feedback and nobody's giving any. The past few weeks I've been a bit busy writing my assignments. (I rewrote about 4 stories yesterday and 3 just this morning, whilst also writing 3 pages of my script, per day for the past 2 weeks. I'm rather proud of myself. I feel like a proper writer.)

You have a good head on your shoulders and I might appear needy but i think it's just a massive shame that so many people are posting stories and getting nothing but me hounding them cus I'm rather critical. Far more critical than most people on this site.

anyway calm calm calm calm, hi there, welcome to the forum, I like this tutorial you've written, it covers most of the ground floor of writing that people need (Though I dont free write much. Mine always end up rubbish and when I get writers block, I just keep writing my stories. If they suck then so be it, I would fix it later.)


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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2010, 10:10:07 PM »
Well...  I have seemingly infinite free time.  I suppose I could take a gander at a few writings each night. 

Just a fair warning...  I'm fairly critical, but I comment and give constructive critsism. 

WRITERS!  If I happen to comment on your publishing and you want to chat about it feel free to PM me.

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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 11:29:48 PM »
Brilliant.
Let's hope you last the month :P
"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #4 on: March 13, 2010, 12:19:27 AM »
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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #5 on: March 13, 2010, 01:44:33 AM »
Are you serious, Asia? These are all just basics of writing. You're telling me you didn't know that? And here I thought you knew a bit about writing, from your RP's.
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« Reply #6 on: March 13, 2010, 10:49:31 AM »
Are you serious, Asia? These are all just basics of writing. You're telling me you didn't know that? And here I thought you knew a bit about writing, from your RP's.
uuuumm... what?

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I like this tutorial you've written, it covers most of the ground floor of writing that people need
I never said this was new stuff to me. I said it was useful to most people who try their hand at writing.
"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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« Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 01:18:44 AM »
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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #8 on: April 08, 2010, 04:28:32 PM »
I think it is USEFUL to me because I gonna trying to write a novel for myself :P
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Re: My Writing Tutorial
« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2010, 08:51:23 PM »
well one thing that helps me almost all the time is if your writing a story and have block then write something in the story that happened in reall life

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