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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #150 on: July 29, 2010, 01:31:15 PM »
"You really are a crime magnet, aren't you," whispered Tabby. She walked beside Chronin, cautiously slowing down. "The sphere's never this dangerous." She put her hands into the pockets of her baggy jeans, feeling the curve of two pistols. The rest of the group held their truncheons ready, with eyes darting around at the increasing number of threats.






Reggie pulled the cloth to cover his friends face again, and then pushed off the bed, making it rattle. He clenched his fists and turned to leave, but changed his mind. He looked at Annie, and then turned away to the window leading into the ship. He turned again, like a caged animal, pacing back and forth.
"Stupid, stupid, stupid!" His arms tensed, and let loose, punching the wall, and storming out disappearing through the narrow corridor.
"Parents always think kids are wasting their youth, and always have done [so] down through the millennia," says Tom Forsyth of RAD Game Tools. "'That Ug, always holding things. His front paws will develop in funny ways. Why can't he walk on all fours like normal proto-hominids?' And so, whatever the kids spend the most time doing, that's always what parents think is a waste of time, and what is corrupting their lives. It doesn't matter what that is. If all they did was homework, parents would be worrying that their kids aren't becoming well-rounded people. And, in fact, parents do this - enrolling math nerds in karate classes and the like. There is no way to win - parental paranoia ensures that kids are always doing the wrong thing."


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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #151 on: July 29, 2010, 05:41:17 PM »
"Ugh, you know what Seema? I am pretty glad that you can turn the feeling off now cause that would hurt like hell right now. How long till you think I'll be up and moveing again?" Kitt said as he slightly raised his head to get a better veiw of his surroundings. Pausing a moment on his shattered limbs.

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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #152 on: July 29, 2010, 06:27:44 PM »
"Even if I am a crime magnet, some of these guys usually stay out of this area... either theres a gang coalation, or someone is leaking info" he mumbled as he continued to look around. They were all gangs he had stopped before, but on different sectors of the Captial sphere. This place was usually a quiet in the way that anything carried out was almost never shown in the light. I'll need to tell 'Auntie' about this even though she might just laugh at how my actions are finally showing their consenquences...
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #153 on: July 30, 2010, 06:06:02 AM »
Nero flew the airless ship into Capital Sphere space.  "Hmmm...quite a bit of security.  I'd hate to be the docking party...speaking of which."  Nero looked to the wall opposite of the door.  With a flick of the wrist, several spikes erupted from the wall and stretched until they were three feet from the door.

If anyone opened the door...their day would become very bad, very quick.



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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #154 on: July 30, 2010, 12:04:25 PM »
Seema's voice didn't speak inside his head. Kitt could hear her for real, as she walked in front of.
"I was wondering when you'd wake up." She adjusted her suit jacket and pulled out a datapad from her pocket. "Repairs shouldn't take too long. A week at most. But right now, as your psychologist, I've suggested that since your immobile for now, we could take you to my office and we can have a little chat." She held the pad at her side, and brushed her fringe from her eyes, while her massive tail swung lethargically from side to side. "What do you think, are you okay with that?"





"You're a dangerous man," Tabby whispered with a smirk on her face. "So what's the plan?". The squad were tense, making steps filled with caution. Everyone looked around, trying to keep their eyes on all the gangs.




The communication panel of Nero's ship lit up, and a male voice rolled through.
"Unknown vessel, do you read us? This is Capital Sphere Orbital Security. Please note, due to an upcoming jump sequence, we cannot let you approach or dock with the Capital Sphere. We apologise for any inconvenience this may cause you."
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #155 on: July 30, 2010, 01:46:27 PM »
"They won't do anything until we get into a less populated street, the last thing they probably want right now is more units coming here to supress a 'gang war'... just keep with the crowded areas until we hook back up with Thread. 'Just a simple patrol' he said..." he grumbled the last part to himself as his troops followed the flow of the crowds to the end of the street, then realized the crowd thinned out to only a tenth of its original size as they went on the return route of the patrol. "The moment they start leaving the alley, start running and don't look back..." he ordered as they went down the road.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #156 on: July 30, 2010, 02:05:21 PM »
Tabby started to laugh, breaking out of the tension, holding her arms and giggling.
"This is fun. Out numbered and under threat? I like this. You know, we could just call for back up, get this fight going fair and square." She grinned and giggled through her breaths. The rest of the squad sent nervous looks her way.
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #157 on: July 30, 2010, 06:09:26 PM »
Annie hugged Blaze tightly, ignoring his muffled complaints... She nuzzled his cheek as she had once done when he was very young, and this time Blaze´s complaints definitely where heard. Annie simply smirked, stopping but not releasing him from the tight hug "You´re gonna be okay... I´ve kept you safe ya whole life, i aint gonna let you go die on me now..." She looked up as Reggie released his anger on the nearest wall, before storming off further into the ship.

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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #158 on: July 30, 2010, 07:08:17 PM »
Nero didn't reply to the call and kept flying.  The engines of the ship were on but if anyone scanned theship for lifesigns they wouldn't find anything.  To machines...it was a ghost ship whose fuel had yet to run out.



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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #159 on: July 30, 2010, 08:52:30 PM »
"Perfectly fine with it. What would you like to know?"

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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #160 on: July 30, 2010, 09:21:36 PM »
"Fine, if I must." he taps his comm, and he immedeatly contacts Thread in an ear-piece he slipped onto his person as he was walking out of the sparring area. "Tabby said to call you, since I'm apparently dragging her into a gang-war on a road that you just walked down." he said as he heard a snicker coming from one of the previously nervous soldiers....
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #161 on: July 30, 2010, 11:24:21 PM »
Reggie stormed through the ship, deliberately stomping along the dull metal floors, like he was trying to break the ship, until he reached his room. The door was more like a shutter, locked in place with a padlock. The electromagnetic locks had failed a long time ago. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a set of keys, fiddling through them to find the right one, grumbling and growling throughout. He put the key into the padlock, turned it one way, and it didn't work. He turned it the other way, and it jammed. He pulled on the padlock, but it refused to budge. Snarling, he slammed the door with his fist. His breath was heavy, his mind was red, and he swung the assault rifle from his back into his hands. A gunshot echoed through the ship.






"Sir, they're not responding." A young fennec stared at his holographic screen, sitting in a line of five other Orbital Security employees. A female dolphin sat on the floor with legs crossed in the centre of the room behind the five subordinates.
"Scan the ship then," The fennec did as ordered, and found no life signs. The results appeared in a holographic screen that popped into life in front of the dolphin. "That's one strange little boat, ain't it," she said, with a light effortless tone. "Right, no life signs, engines still running, heading to the sphere. You know the procedures. EMP then KRoon it out of the way."
"Yes ma'am."

Out in space, an EMP missile appeared through the dark like a spec, rocketing towards Nero's ship.






Seema spread a closed smile across her narrow muzzle.
"Let's go somewhere more private first, shall we?" There was a noise, something clunked behind Kitt's back, and slowly his quadruple amputee, cyborg body tilted until he was flat on his back. He stared at the ceiling as the platform he was on carried away to a nearby building. Inside it, the walls and the ceiling were filled with colour. They almost seemed alive, as vines of purple crawled and writhed across muted pinks , and a haze of white sparkled all around. He passed another doorway, and the room he entered cleansed his mind with calm. Sky blue danced with vibrant, living greens. Speakers hidden in the walls filled the air with a warm filling tone. The platform Kitt was on whirred, and tilted his body forward just slightly. As he looked around, he saw Seema leaving the room, with her luxurious tail flowing behind her slender legs. The door swung shut behind her, leaving Kitt alone. Around him, there was very furnishings, save for a long psychiatrist's couch, and a chair opposite, with a small table between them. When Seema returned, she had a jug of water, two cups and a plate of cooked chicken all on a tray, which she placed on the table.
"If you get hungry or  thirsty, just ask," she said, and then plucked a digipen and a datapad from her pocket. She sat down and preened her hair, before clearing her throat. "So Kitt," she said with a perfectly pleasant smile. "We've done so much to you and with you, but the group don't feel that we know who you are. Basically I'm here to figure you out and make sure you're okay; that you're handling things." She leaned forward and her dripped with sympathy. "How is the transition between what you were, and what you are now? You seem to be enjoying it but I don't think that enjoyment will last. Are you sure you aren't worried about the people back home? Your family, your friends? Did you have a girlfriend back there?"





Thread's breathy laugh huffed through the comms.
"Oh them? Yeah we met them. Nice guys. They didn't seem interested when we walked by, but I'm guessing that's not the case with you. Maybe they like your smell." he laughed again, and drank something down. He smacked his lips then continued his little laugh. "Look, if you want us to go over and smooth things out, since you're obviously not a diplomat, then I'd be happy to lend a hand. If it's fighters you'll need, we'll lend everyone else's hands."
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #162 on: July 30, 2010, 11:59:35 PM »
Chronin kept a grimace held back as he heard Thread's choices. "I would like any muscle you can offer, since its possible that I have more than two-hundred gang-bangers hiding behind the alleys and stalls just to get a chance at me. Laugh and I'll rip your tongue out when we get back..." after a few more moments of one-sided conversations on Thread's part, Chronin turned off his comm before turning to Tabby with a look between disgust and confusion. "Thread suggested diplomacy of all things. Diplomacy, what are we... Ambassadors?!"

That was when the first bullet flew past his head and the fight began...
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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #163 on: July 31, 2010, 04:12:20 AM »
Nero waited until the last possible moment, turning off everything nanoseconds before the EMP hit.  The ship would have been fried either way...if it had still been the same ship he flew away from Earth on.  The changes were far more than just the look of the ship...

The crystal of the ship was alive...organic...all attached to a simple nervous system in the heart of the ship, which Nero had just put into a temporary coma. 

To Orbital security, the EMP had done its job.

To Nero...all that was left to do was wait.



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Re: Everflame 2
« Reply #164 on: July 31, 2010, 06:28:09 AM »
"Nah, I've never had a girl friend. I was always a little too smart for my own good, and being around people that were easy to read and tell what they wanted got me labled as a potential psychic. So it kinda made other people paranoid about me. As a result I became rather reclusive. As for my family I'm not too worried about them Yeah I know I'm going to end up missing them eventualy. My mother is also planning on having another child after i was gone so i guess they will have something to keep them happy. At some point and time I can start a family of my own so that could take up my time that I'm not working. Yes I know that with the transitions it is possible i couldent had they taken a full system through my lower half, but theres a slightly different feel to the machinery than to my natural flesh. I can tell where the machine starts and where it integrates into my system. So I know whats flesh and whats machine. But on the plus note its not all that uncomfortable. As to my enjoyment of it I get the same enjoyment from moving and pulling dare devil stunts that I did before. The added strength, however, is a nice little bonus."
Kitt smiled as he ended the previous statement. He had answered truthfully. He also knew just how much a pshychologist could read into such simple statements to garner information as to what a persons true identity was.
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